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There Comes A Time
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There Comes A Time |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
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What makes us tell a stranger things we usually keep inside? What is it that these people have that others can’t provide? What cause’s all the pain that makes us so hard on ourselves? Some pass responsibility Some take it for them self It seems like most the troubles that we find all stem from greed It makes a person sell their soul to get more then they need Why can’t we just be satisfied with everything we’ve got? Why do we have to take away from all those who have not? When are we going to live our lives and make our dreams come true? Instead of finding an excuse to simply just make do? There comes a point in all our paths when obstacles abide And you must choose to struggle or to take them all in stride Life doesn’t come with warranties when things start to break down Life preservers from the sky don’t fall before you drown It’s true sometimes we are a victim of our own device And happiness is locked away in hearts as cold as ice Too bad the secrets to our bliss so often can reside Deep within a place where demons also choose to hide It does not mean that we cannot control our destiny And live a life that flows along in perfect harmony Life doesn’t owe us anything, yet we can’t help but grieve Until we learn how nice it feels to give, then to receive We all possess a spirit that is deep and limitless Learning how to tap it is the key to our success All the answers that we need are out there far and wide There in that pretty flower other times, their cut and dried There comes a time at crossroads, when we have to now decide To keep on walking aimlessly or stop, and look inside |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Excellent message within this poem Richy. One we could all listen very closely to and maybe have a better day. Thanx. |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Great piece, well said. Life is full of decisions we just have to try to make the right ones without hurting others. Julie |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Richy Your words speak volumes and send a very important message to all of us. I couldn't agree more with all you said. I hope you are well. Take care......Sue I am in motion |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Richy, this is a very beautiful poem full to the top with truth. I enjoyed it very much, friend  Hugs,  Ethel |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Richy, this is a very touching piece for me...I will keep this in my library. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I like this very much... both the questions to ponder (though thinking is a tough job for a blonde *G*) and the wisdom you include... Excellent work! *S* |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"There comes a time at crossroads, when we have to now decide To keep on walking aimlessly or stop, and look inside" Excellent write Richy! Much enjoyed the 'oh so true' words of wisdom. ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Richy, One question, OK? Are you talking to me? I could have sworn you were speaking directly to me with this one. Bud, I have to say I love all of your work...even the "Ballad of Jed Clampett" poam was wonderul, but this...this is spectacular! Of course, you always reel me in with those poems that make me ponder..."I Wonder." Not to leave you in suspense about the frog thing...It is a joke between a friend and me (I will call him that at this point for lack of a better word...I have called him a few words that cannot be repeated here, however) LOL. He said I was going to kiss a lot of frogs before I find my prince. He didn't know what a giant toad he was. Unfortunately, I didn't know either. So, now I date, but I have to keep kicking those darn frogs off my lilypad. Does that make sense? Love this writing, A real goodun, Jed! Patricia |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I thoroughly enjoyed the common sense wisdom in this piece. It appeals to the need to question ourselves. Nicely done! Eric The best teachers have the biggest ears |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
a very wise poem, and very touching in parts. I wish another would read this and think hard and realize the truth in your words. hugssss for making me "feel" tonight M |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
An excellent write. Enjoyed it very much. |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Coming from you Barry, that means a lot! Thanks so much for stopping in. And for the kind remarks. I hope things are going well for you! That is such a good point Julie. And many times, one of the hardest factors. It was very nice to see you again! I appreciate you taking the time. Thanks much! Hey Sue, how have you been? I hope all is well with you too! Thanks so much for dropping in. And as always, for your encouraging support. I hope everything is going good “Down Under.” You know I’m talking about Australia right? lol Ethel, your such a kind person. A friend, anyone would be lucky to have. Gary is one lucky man! Thanks for the nice reply. Hugs back to you! Dixie, I’m so glad you liked it! Wow, and in your library even. Now that is an honor! Thanks for the kind words. Hi Nancy, I’m so pleased you enjoyed it. And thanks for the hugs and smiles. That’s more then enough to make any person’s day! Thank you for your reply, it is always appreciated. Patricia, lol your so funny! You know it’s funny though. That happens to me too. I’ll read a poem, and think, dang! That could have been written, just for me! Patricia, thanks for such a great reply. You really warmed my heart. And as far as them frogs go, I have a little joke for you, I found on the internet: There once was a little frog who wanted to take out a home improvement loan to fix up his pad. His name is Kermit Jagger. He hopped over to his local bank, went up to the teller and said, "Hi, I'd like to take out a loan to fix up my pad." The teller replied, "You need to see our loan officer. Her name is "Patricia Black." So the frog hops over to the loan officer's desk and sits down. When Patricia arrives she ask, "What can I do for you?" The frog says, "I'd like to take out a loan to fix up my pad." Patricia asked, "What do you have for collateral?" After thinking for a couple of moments about what he could offer the frog reaches into his little froggy pocket and pulls out a small white elephant. "This is a very unusual form of collateral." said Patricia. "I'll have to check with our bank president to see if it's ok." Patricia goes to the president and says, "There's a frog named Kermit Jagger out there who want's a home loan and this white elephant is all he is offering for collateral. What should I do?" The bank president takes the small white elephant and after carefully examining it hands it back to Patricia and says, "It's a nick-knack Patty Black give the frog a loan. His old man's a Rolling Stone." “Time’s fun, when your having flies.” K. The Frog I’ know, I’m croaking you up! Thanks for everything, Ellie May! lol Unkl Jedd Hey Eric, I’m not sure if we’ve met. Thanks for the great reply! That was very thoughtful of you. Take Care, Richy Hi Maureen, this was funny: “I wish another would read this and think hard and realize the truth in your words.” I know what you mean, me too... lol And big hugs back to you, for making me “feel” (good) too! Thanks again for your kindness! Hi Eloise, its a real pleasure to meet you! Thanks for reading, and for your kind words. [This message has been edited by Richy (05-30-2003 09:59 PM).] |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Hi Richy, Enjoyed your poem, and your message. Sandra |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Hey, your mic was on and I heard you loud and clear. LOL And a great big thanks for not referring to me as Granny! Watch out for all dem critters Ellie Mae keeps in the cement pond. Might lose a leg or sumptin. I heard some of 'em eat frogs! Of course, the frog eatin' comment does not refer to ya'll. But I have a few frogs, well...for another poem, for another poem! LOL Patricia |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Richy, another wonderful work here my dear friend, you must tap away at those keys endlessly, it held a true message which kept me captivated till the end. Too bad the secrets to our bliss so often can reside Deep within a place where demons also choose to hide This peace I enjoyed most of all, showed fantasic imagination, wish I had thought of the lines myself. Congratulations! May we all stop and look inside from time to time. Take care my friend. Sorry have missed some of your works, will catch up again. Sincerely Rick |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Thank you Sandra, thanks for reading, and for the nice comment! Did you Patricia? I was wondering why I was getting all that feedback (from the mic)...lol Hey did I ever tell you the time I asked the waiter, “Do you have frog legs?” And he said, “No, I just walk this way!” Well, I hope soon, that one of your frogs, make you hoppy... Ooops! I meant, happy... Just remember, love, is total acceptance of the other person... Warts, and all... Talk to you soon Patricia, Richy Thanks Rick, this was a poem I had written a while ago. But I took out a few verses, and then added a few new ones. It’s kind of jumbled, kind of like a puzzle...lol but heck, I flung it against the barn anyway. They say, if you throw enough ---- (fill in blanks) against the wall, some of it is bound to stick. Well Rick, it’s time I make like a cow turd, and hit the trail... lol See ya soon, Richy |
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