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Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

0 posted 2003-05-29 02:29 PM

Can you feel?
Does the pain
make you blink?
If I poke you like this
will you
scream
at me some vulgar thing?
or will you laugh it off
as nothing
as the knives of darkness
rip your soul.

Smile for the camera
pretty dear
show those pouty lips
its only just begun
decent to hell
nonstop flight.

Listen
quietly
and you'll
hear the hounds
howling
for your flesh
yet you pretend
its only a dream
sadly true
but longer
eternity you see.

I want to understand
crawl beneath
your painted skin
to see a person crying
underneath.

I want to violate
your mind
rape your intellect
from the inside out.

Dear girl
you wonder who I am
or do you even care
I am the the ignorance
you hide
behind your eyes
when no one else is around.

I am the skeletons in your closet
your every waking fear
wear your sexy best
for misery is here
I'll take you to the sexual throes
of agony and pain
leaving but a empty shell
to serve me another night
again..

So Smile pretty blonde hair dear
for the camera please
let's have your name
ah ms. naive mediocity
now that's a name
mine is misery
and your my dear
are my little game.

[This message has been edited by Brad Majors (05-29-2003 02:30 PM).]

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2003-05-29 02:38 PM

I am the the ignorance
you hide
behind your eyes
when no one else is around.

^ nice lines...this one is a little scary
*s
M

jellybeans
Member Elite

since 2000-10-13

Posts 2298

2 posted 2003-05-29 02:41 PM

wow...powerful poetry sir brad......what a story line

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

3 posted 2003-05-29 02:43 PM

thank you

laurie
Member

since 2003-05-28

Posts 153
canada, ontario

4 posted 2003-05-29 02:46 PM

frightening. and somehow, and heres the REAL frightening part, l can see myself as that girl. your skill with words is amazing.
the story line... well, as 'the others' said, it's amazing. frightening though. (in a good way)

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

5 posted 2003-05-29 04:41 PM

You know, I just don't have any desire to piss you off. LOL

Mr. Misery needs to figure out why he likes it so much where he is at....

I loved this Dan.

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

6 posted 2003-05-29 04:45 PM

wow what write!! very good!!

gMt

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

7 posted 2003-05-29 04:58 PM

Brad you'll have to stop taping all those perverted underground films on TV without borders.....I'm really worried about ya!

Seriously, once again very powerful provocative attempt at languaging the dominant inner soul of a control freak
Eric

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

8 posted 2003-05-29 06:32 PM

thank you

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

9 posted 2003-05-30 04:24 AM

wow

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

10 posted 2003-05-30 05:49 AM

What did you read or watch before you wrote this...the motivation...James

Rick
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia

11 posted 2003-05-30 09:53 AM

Brad, this was a very powerful write indeed, which I much enjoyed, has given me many thoughts to ponder, thank you for that.

Sincerely
Rick

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

12 posted 2003-05-30 10:47 AM

thank you!

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