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Wrap The Man
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Wrap The Man |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass 
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Wrap The Man A pretty smile to zap the man, Show sunshine to his rain, And little tears to tap the man; He’ll long to hear your pain. Whatever your mishap, the man Will yearn to help you out – You’ve got two arms, so strap the man, You’ll hook him like a trout. Now turn your back: you’ll flap the man, You know you’re gaining ground; Be angry, even slap the man – You’ll spin his heart around. Or pout and you’ll entrap the man, An easy thing to do…. Around your finger wrap the man: You know he wants you to….. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
LOL, that man may wish he'd run the other way. Hmm...wondering, what kind of gift wrapping works best? LOL |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
"what kind of gift wrapping works best?" .................you. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
YEP!  I think you have a new fan. You could hurt me with your bare hands. You could hurt me using the sharp edge of what you say. JEWEL |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sure 'nuff |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ed this is cute, like you!  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Personally, I never strap or slap a man to get him wrapped around my baby finger. I simply smile or pout and he willingly wraps himself around my pinkie!  Cute writie! EA |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
It can't be as easy as you make it seem, Ed...but it's a nice thought, nevertheless...  |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
It's easy if the man is me.... "You're an easy touch, you are..." said a woman very dear to my heart, and just this morning over coffee.... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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CastleGuard Senior Member
since 2003-04-30
Posts 760Alberta, Canada |
LOL, entertaining read. May not agree with everything, but the essence of the truth is there... CG |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
BIG GRIN... You inspire...I needed this! Thanks, TD |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Oh, I do love this. *S* Of course, you may shudder when you see what your wonderful rhymes inspired! LOL I'd much rather unwrap a man With his participation Than to try to entrap the man To me, that's aberration. I could portray as a sap the man Who finds me no temptation But the thought of me in his lap, poor man Is cause for trepidation! |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
 Ed, Ed, Ed...I was going to write a cute little rhyme, until i got down to Suthern's reply. Than, I really was laughing and forgot everything I had thought of. LOL You are a mess, Ed, but a cute mess!! LOL  Hugs Ethel |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Wrap him here wrap him there Wrap your arms just everywhere Wrap arms around him good and tight He doesn't care it feels just right When a man falls to a womans charm He thinks she can cause him no harm As long as she gives him her kisses Hugs and nothing else she misses She has him wrapped around her little finger And close by her his heart will always linger [This message has been edited by garysgirl (05-30-2003 03:38 PM).] |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
terrificly written gMt |
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