Open Poetry #26 |
Why I Love You |
the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is from a man's point of view. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ You think night and day Why do you love me When I make a lot of mistakes She just said Because one day I will make mistakes Just like you Then I say to her But I make the same ones Over and over again Yet you forgive me just the same She says to him No one is perfect I even make the same mistakes Once and again Then I say to her You need a better Man than me I hurt you once to many Just throw me away She says to him You may not be perfect But I do not care I am not going to throw you away Because I care Then I say to her That is Why I love you You forgive And one day You will forget My past mistakes Cold hands means a warm heart |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
now this is a true write of "being in love" gMt |
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ThunderMage Senior Member
since 2002-06-20
Posts 812Canada |
I agree. Only an angel could write something like this. What is life without poetry and adventure? |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Julie, it is very good to see you back her. This is a very good poem. Hugs Ethel |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
cool! |
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