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Saunni
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777
West Virginia

0 posted 2003-05-28 10:18 PM


I changed this one but every year near the time of his death I post a few to remember him. In Memory Of... Warren "Newie" Wallace.

Seven Dollars And Some Change

He must have known the winds would change once he left
The streets of home would never again look the same
To what was familiar to the hearts of this small town
Left an irresistible cry in his name...

Beyond wealthy he strolled there in a style all his own
With years of good decisions running down his face
His profile can still be seen when the moon sheds just the right light
So, here's to the spirit of that old man who blessed a city with grace...

All saw his very being as a memory never able to put to rest
To the world he represented all that was so good and kind
He was like an angel with transparent wings upon his back
And, every footstep left a hint of the man he was behind...

So rich in Gods promises and sometimes blinding to the eyes
But, never a stranger even if you never crossed his path
That mans faith in the race to touch what he never knew he did
Left a million smiles on a city for a lifetime to last...

My vision of his walk in this lifetime still stands ever so clear
And, nobody knew that aging soul more than I had
His light led the way for many with his obvious heart
But, nothing touches me more then those miles of my dad...

To what's comfortable and well-off was to the eyes who saw him
You were right, he was rich in the most rewarding
ways
That man died with seven dollars and some change in his pocket
But, more then gold are my memories that linger today...

Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S

© Copyright 2003 Saundra - All Rights Reserved
QjQ
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since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756
U.S.A.
1 posted 2003-05-28 10:30 PM


money can be spent but memerys are forever

gMt

icebox
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since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383
in the shadows
2 posted 2003-05-28 11:36 PM


WOW!  That was good.  Thank you for sharing it.
the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
3 posted 2003-05-28 11:40 PM


This is true. Memories are more important than money. Because memories stay with you for the rest of your life.

Cold hands means a warm heart

lost_star
Member
since 2003-03-15
Posts 114
NY, U.S.A
4 posted 2003-05-29 12:36 PM


You can't put a price tag on memories. Great work!
passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
5 posted 2003-05-29 02:48 AM


Oh Saunni! God!

this reminds me of my brother so much...a very touching write that I will keep in my heart forever...thank you

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
6 posted 2003-05-29 03:45 PM


Nice writing...James
ethome
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since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
7 posted 2003-05-29 03:59 PM


Give me memories anytime, there's nothing more precious.
Nice work!

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