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Make My Day!
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Make My Day! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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Oh,you dastardly little twit who sits there on the wooden rail! Can’t you see you are giving a fit and causing me to look quite pale! Just grinnin’ and droolin’ upon the ground beneath that horrid nest. Can’t you leave and start movin’ on. You know it’s you that I detest! Ya came into my life that day when rain and sleet were pourin’ down. Ya came as a guest, not asked to stay and now you twit, stop foolin’ around. Ya know I like my porridge hot with steam coming from in the bowl. Ya know its for me, you it’s not and that is how the dice will roll. And when I took a cold shower cause the water was down the drain. It was then, that one morning hour I knew I could not do it again. So, listen Bird to what I say cause I am shuckin’ the first round into this magnum, “Make my day” and it’s you, this target I’ve found! Goodnite Grip.... [This message has been edited by Magnus (05-29-2003 09:18 AM).] |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
HEHE...passing him the night scope... REAL Cute. TD |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Cool write here! I sensed your frustration  Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Whew.....Don't do it that-a-way....Borrow my cat! Clever write but sort of unlike you....But hey, it's a poet's world in here. |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Hey Barry, make sure, that when you got that dastardly little varmit cornered, and have you 44 Mag shoved in it’s face, you don’t forget to say, “Do you feel lucky, Punk!? “Well Do Ya!? (Clint Eastwood dialogue folks) That’s what I always do... lol You know I’m kidding right? I shot a bird once, when I was real young, with a BB gun. I hit it in the neck, and it dropped dead. It really affected me, and I never did it again. I have done my fair share of fishing, but never did do any hunting. Even though my dad and some of my brothers do. Any who, great write! Them little buggers can be quite the nuisance, cant’ they? Take Good Care Barry, Richy |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Touch a feather on that birdy's head and I'll have to fit ya for cement shoes...you dirty rat!! lol. Oh, I do hope this was just to give us a chuckle. hugs, Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Yes Chris...all in fun...this is POE etry related bird stuff.....AKA the Raven.... I am getting tired of his tapping, rapping and spyin' (amongst other things) |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oh, my! And what was in that porridge of yours? Cute write--you were just joking about murdering one of our feathered friends, weren't you, dear lover of man and beast?  Mornin' hugs, EA |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
oh yes sir,make your day enjoyed this read |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Barry The crows around here wake me predawn every day...grumble...but, I still love birds. Enjoyed the fun in your poem, dear man! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I got those kinds of birds that have the shrill that starts low and gets higher, can't explain it, but damn it annoys me. |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Ooh, must be an annoying blue jay or? Cor |
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