»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #26
»
Sometimes...
| Open Poetry #26 |
|
Sometimes... |
|
|
Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands 
|
Sometimes... I would like to live in a make believe land of my imagination as little children do... No worries no pain too big to be healed by a simple kiss |
||
| © Copyright 2003 Neeraja Wittebrood - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Neeraja Wouldn't that be nice, enjoyed. |
||
|
Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Neeraja...A poem of simplicity and truth. Very well-written. Evokes thought and goes to the heart of the matter. ***Ivy Rose |
||
|
Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
That world is just a thought away. I go there often... Loving hugs, EA |
||
|
passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
children do live in a beautiful world |
||
garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I really like this poem. I think we all have these wishes sometimes. I guess that's why so many of us like to keep our inner child close by, so we can act like one sometimes.  Hugs, Ethel |
||
|
Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Yes, Neeraja...that would be nice, but if we could, we'd never leave and who would fix our supper?  I do enjoy your poetry... |
||
|
karebear07 Member
since 2003-04-15
Posts 64Texas |
that was beautiful. -Kara <>< |
||
|
QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
I enjoyed reading your write! >>QjQ<< looking forward to reading more! |
||
|
Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
Beautiful Neeraja...we've forgotten the simplicity of living no matter the age... Thanks |
||
|
passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yeah |
||
|
Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Amazing how a parent's kiss can heal all wounds... then again... kisses are magic! |
||
|
Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Neeraja - yes, just a simply kiss would do at times... BC |
||
|
Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
*sigh* a simple kiss really does heal every kind of pain...even the kind we think we will carry for the rest of our lives....I love the way you wrote this...do not give up on such a fantasy for fantasy can become reality.... |
||
|
Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 can I come along with you? |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
