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May Showers |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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May Showers Water slanted slick from skies Driven into my given crown Rain tippled eyelashes as Droplets retreated down my face That strict curl of hair? Slid into tender curve, then He rounded me inward Warding off the downpour We were never closer. |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
oh my i see the springtime of love in this write!!! gMt |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is just beautiful. I can feel the love radiating. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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majnu
since 2002-10-13
Posts 1088SF Bay Area |
"tippled eylashes" that is a most excellent phrase. it wonderfully captures the look, feel, and implies sound of the rain on your face. nice write. -majnu |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Wow, I’m starting to like the rain now! Karilea, that was REALLY lovely, Richy |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
I like "tippled" love it, actually  Lovely poetry...lovely you. You could hurt me with your bare hands. You could hurt me using the sharp edge of what you say. JEWEL |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Very lovely my friend...indeed. jwesley |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Karilea, this is beautiful, sweet friend, and may each of these summer seasons bring you many beautiful tidings of love that feels just like Sleep Beauty's fairy-tale! (sigh) I love this, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
OH! THIS is precious! I love this Karilea...and I'm keeping it! ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Hey there dear poet. I'd keep you sheltered from the rain anytime.....But alas you belong to another....All the good ones are taken! Search Search Search! |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
very nice K... very nice indeed... |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice write,my friend |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea A lovely capture of a moment!  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wonderful! |
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