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Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

0 posted 2003-05-28 05:42 PM

When your words flow over my visual field,
the dimensions of my heart
are affected

the very heart of me expands,
...in harmonic resolution
softly
resonating,
and the cells of my being
vibrate at a new energy level
the universe has never known
or felt before.

Oh, how I wish for you to be
sitting beside me,
caressing more than
my begger's eyes and open mind,
more than the thoughts that reside
deep inside
my sheltered psyche.

And you don't even
know me.

Strange,
but that does nothing to stop
these feelings,
these vibrations,
these flashing lights
I see in my field of vision
whenever I read
your passion.

Love is elusive,
but not impossible
for dreamers.

I think I shall dream
tonight.

Edder
Senior Member

since 2003-04-02

Posts 671

1 posted 2003-05-28 05:47 PM

i've known these feelings too. you expressed them well. a great write!

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

2 posted 2003-05-28 06:03 PM

We always dream...just of different things every night..

Love these thoughts, and I share some of your wishes.

You could hurt me with your bare hands. You could hurt me using the sharp edge of what you say. JEWEL

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

3 posted 2003-05-28 06:08 PM

Edder, yes...I think it may be a fairly common occurrence.

Temptress, so nice to have a reply from you. Yes, and yanno? your poetry ALWAYS moves me emotionally.

icebox
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

4 posted 2003-05-29 12:20 PM

Sad that such yearning is not fulfilled, yet there are many doorways in the mansion of dreams.

I believe I will go out walking in the cool night air and think of the warm touch of a willing woman.

Thank you for sharing your poem with us.

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

5 posted 2003-05-29 12:43 PM

It's a hot night here. Enjoy the walk, ice, and enjoy your dream tonight.
I intend to enjoy my dreams tonight.

*sigh*

bbent
Senior Member

since 2001-01-07

Posts 521
Alaska

6 posted 2003-05-29 02:18 AM

now you know the effect you have on so many of your captive fans here at passions...this one for sure.
sweet dreams always and here's hoping some morning you wake up to find there not dreams at all but reality.

Live like it's your last day...
Dance like nobody's watching...
Love like you've never been hurt...

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2003-05-29 02:25 AM

awesome write, love the ending especially!

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

8 posted 2003-05-29 11:44 AM

Ray? captives? LOL, thanks for that 'passionate hug' you sweetie! sweet dreams

Dixie, wishing you sweet (hot) dreams, too,

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