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Self Slavery
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Self Slavery |
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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia 
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Mechanical cyber erotic visionaries speaking in unknown tongues come to me in paranoia induced dream Playing tricks on my feeble mind hot metal burns the flesh making me see a god inside my mental prison Craving sensuality from inanimate icons of reality past which call to me lustfully turning my tainted soul inside out I wish I could sleep again without the demons crawling out from under my skin as I pop my pills and pray to a saviour I forgot in Sunday School rhetoric Laying my head to mortal sleep on satin sheets next to some sexual fix think of the meaning of life before falling to sleep in mental vomit. |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
nice write brad!! gMt |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I was enjoying the imagery until that last line.  |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
chuckle. Sometimes, m'friend? Y'just gotta back away from the pc...  Enjoyed this, Brad.  |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Yep, in times like these you just have to go outside on your patio, for nature is far more erotic yet innocent all the same! (big hugggsssssss) Find the arrow always in the organic beauties, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Brad, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
Awesome write Brad. Jason |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
What a great title and a powerful write! There's a lot being said in this piece. |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
thank you |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
I read this one this morning and couldn't reply (darn work) then. So here I am... This write is powerful with it's meaning. Once again you write like no other. Loved it. Susan |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
thank you |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
cool! |
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