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Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2003-05-28 03:58 PM

Swaying Memories

It's been long since I've been there
on that other plane, in a realm of square
where I saw you, that late night's eve
when we then first began to believe

That dreams could be reality and

Reality could be seen in the dream

The times were good, the gifts, serene
laughter came, and in love, careened
we bent to sway the music our way
until the time of that fateful day

And your dream of real went one way

And real the dream you could not sway

Now held in thin silver lover's knot
are kept the visions that were sought
and from a plane long left behind
fondly recall the days you were mine

Soft echoes from that plane skim along
catch me, caught now with loss of song
and I wonder aloud if I truly belong
or if my reality has all been wrong

And quietly I recall

When the dream of real went our way

And real the dream of love did sway

QjQ
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since 2003-04-18

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1 posted 2003-05-28 04:15 PM

oh yes!! the dreams of love that come true what a feeling!!! nicely written "K"

gMt

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

2 posted 2003-05-28 04:30 PM

Soft echoes from that plane skim along
catch me, caught now with loss of song
and I wonder aloud if I truly belong
or if my reality has all been wrong

My goodness but that tugs at my heartstrings.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

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Canada eh.

3 posted 2003-05-28 04:40 PM

"The times were good, the gifts, serene
laughter came, and in love, careened
we bent to sway the music our way
until the time of that fateful day

And your dream of real went one way

And real the dream you could not sway"

Haunting..sad..yet oh so beautiful.
Love this Karilea.
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

4 posted 2003-05-28 04:48 PM

This brought a smile to my face. These were such beautiful words.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Patricia
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since 2003-04-06

Posts 2160
Missouri

5 posted 2003-05-28 05:01 PM

My Sister,

I know these familar words. Yes, they are mine. Except with eloquence of pen you bring that I have yet to find.

With pasts so same, our paths were destined to meet.

Love,
Sis

Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

6 posted 2003-05-28 05:01 PM

Karilea, every single line tugs at my heartstings.... although sad it's written so beautifully.

hugs

Maree.

Martie

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7 posted 2003-05-28 05:49 PM

Karilea

Time changes so many things, and yet some things stay the same, like the emotive beauty of this poem.

vandana

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8 posted 2003-05-28 06:50 PM

liked this

Corinne
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state of confusion

9 posted 2003-05-28 06:52 PM

This is surreal, Sunshine, very nicely done!

Cor

Richy
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since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

10 posted 2003-05-28 07:48 PM

Karilea, that was one of the lovliest poems I've read.

Where, or what, would we be, if it were not for our memories?

So touching!

Richy

passing shadows
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displaced

11 posted 2003-05-30 04:43 AM

yes

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