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vlraynes
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0 posted 2003-05-28 03:51 PM




~*A Birthday Un-Sonnet*~



I tried to write a poem just for you
On this, the anniversary of your birth
I told my muse just what she ought to do
To spin a rhyme of happiness and mirth

I asked her, 'please', to tell you just how much
Your friendship means on this, and every, day
To let you know you're loved by all you touch
Sincere appreciation to convey

I asked her not just once, nor even twice
To pen a gift of verse for you, my friend
I hinted that a sonnet would be nice
And hoped my stubborn muse would comprehend

With rebel grin, she looked at me and said...
'Nope!'

~vlraynes


Oh well...Happy Birthday anyway, friend.
Thanks for being YOU, and for always being there.



"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

[This message has been edited by vlraynes (05-28-2003 03:53 PM).]

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1 posted 2003-05-28 04:15 PM


nice
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2 posted 2003-05-28 04:15 PM



ROTFLMBO...too cute...Nan will love it!

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3 posted 2003-05-28 04:28 PM


He he, I had the same attitude from my sweet muse today too.  Very cute Vicky she is going to adore this.
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4 posted 2003-05-28 04:42 PM


Ah..this is so cute Vicky!
Nan will love it!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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5 posted 2003-05-28 05:11 PM


Ahhhh Nan will definately appreciate this.

Beautiful!

Maree

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6 posted 2003-05-28 05:17 PM


Well-well-well....happys to ya, Nan!

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Nan
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7 posted 2003-05-28 10:39 PM


NOPE - 'Tis NOT a sonnet - It's a NONSonnet.... as opposed to a NANSonnet... or maybe it's a NONOSonnet... Or maybe...

Oh never mind - I like it whatever it is.. Thankya, m'friend...

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8 posted 2003-05-29 01:25 AM


hehehe


awwww
Happy b-day Nan

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9 posted 2003-05-29 01:32 AM


I, too, add my Birthday wishes to Nan. She has wished me well on mine!

'Tiz great that everyome pays attention to special days!
  
Blessings!
Shirl

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10 posted 2003-05-29 02:29 AM


wonderful!
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11 posted 2003-05-29 09:46 PM


Nicely undone, Vicky!
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