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Open Poetry #26

Surrender

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

0 posted 2003-05-27 07:29 PM

Here
we sit
by the glowing
embers the flames dancing
in
stride
of
the raindrops
touching the window,
so gentle your eyes touch
my beamish heart and instantly
I
surrender my
love to you.

QjQ

[This message has been edited by QjQ (05-27-2003 07:31 PM).]

WhiteRose
Member Elite

since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

1 posted 2003-05-27 07:32 PM

This is beautiful. I can feel the warmth of the fire..Very nicely written glenn.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

2 posted 2003-05-27 07:35 PM

Superbly written, Glenn. A very nice and
loving poem of devotion..

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2003-05-27 07:52 PM

Glenn~
Very nice~
*huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2003-05-27 08:05 PM

Nice writing...James

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2003-05-28 03:20 AM

beautiful!

whiskey

Senior Member

since 1999-12-28

Posts 1278
Australia

6 posted 2003-05-28 04:46 AM

This is a beautiful piece, so romantic its wonderful

nicely expressed

Julie

"Dont cry because its over, smile because it happened. "

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

7 posted 2003-05-28 05:11 PM

enjoyed the read

JilGirl
Member

since 2003-05-24

Posts 364
Washington

8 posted 2003-05-29 01:36 AM

Reads like a "Yummy" time!

A terrific write!

Blessings!
Shirl

Till oceans cease to flow and deserts lose their sands, may beauty surround you every day and wealth be in your hands.

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