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Open Poetry #26

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WhiteRose
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since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

0 posted 2003-05-27 07:05 PM

I remember thinking
each and every time
I saw the silly little sign,
I'm not here at all.

At times amid the buildings tall
or high upon a mountain top
where breath would stop...
take in the sight of Godly wonder.

To me it seemed a kind of blunder
an assumption by one I'd never met,
one who's blind,
uninformed as yet,
to the whereabouts of me.

Someone that surely could not see
so how is it that they knew?

How could they see that you,
were distant and aloof,
the map maker must have goofed.

You are here, indeed!

I was travelling out of need,

and

I was never really there.

WhiteRose 05/27/03

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

1 posted 2003-05-27 07:25 PM

nicely expressed write

QjQ

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

2 posted 2003-05-27 07:39 PM

Been missin' ya! Excellent write...very
very well written words.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2003-05-28 03:21 AM

dang! never thought of it all that way...thanks for the other side of it

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