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JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2003-05-27 05:39 PM

End of Never

Oh no,
not another
we could have
stayed together
until the end of never.
Isn't it funny how
our imagination
likes to stretch
the limits of time.
When in reality
friendships
come and go.
And lovers
soon become
old friends
we used to know.

JamesLee
May26
2003

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

1 posted 2003-05-27 05:46 PM

Well said. Enjoyed. TD

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2003-05-27 06:50 PM

Beautiful and somehow cynical.
The end of never is the measure of every true love ... as long as it lasts. Sigh.
Love, Margherita

WhiteRose
Member Elite

since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

3 posted 2003-05-27 06:52 PM

I really like the write of this. It's a circular thought that ends where it began. Nicely done.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

4 posted 2003-05-27 07:51 PM

This could be a nice quote for the next
thousand or so years and be applicable
through all time!!

Nicely put..

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2003-05-27 07:57 PM

JamesMichael~

Oh my ...

'in reality
friendships
come and go.
And lovers
soon become
old friends
we used to know'

You sure spilled some wise ink here~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

6 posted 2003-05-27 08:07 PM

very god write and thoughts

QjQ

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

7 posted 2003-05-27 08:22 PM

enjoyed

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

8 posted 2003-05-27 08:30 PM

Thank you This Diamond, Margerita, White Rose, Magnus, Marge, QJQ and vandana for the nice responses.
Yes Margerita this is cynical and rather sarcastic also...I hope most people do not find this to be true in their lives...including me...and you...and everybody else...ha...James

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

9 posted 2003-05-28 03:19 AM

cool!