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Jason Lyle
Senior Member

since 2003-02-07

Posts 1438
With my darkling

0 posted 2003-05-27 04:48 PM

I read your words, daily my friends
And they dig deep
God what wisdom
is spawned
on these pages

Sometimes, you make me laugh
Or sometimes, you force a hard look
inside
Maybe that kind of pain
brings healing
or maybe just fresh
pain

I will not deny
That sometimes the
pain feels welcome,
deserved,
A sick acceptance
of punishment
I asked for

But sometimes
The words written by you all
Show me a love and
acceptance
I never expected
But I swim in it
And it is new
for me

So keep showing me truth
in words
keep inflicting pain with truth
Show me beauty, in small things
teach me lessons
of the soul

And I will learn
every day
from your words

[This message has been edited by Jason Lyle (05-28-2003 03:08 PM).]

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2003-05-27 04:52 PM

These are very truthful words here. I loved it.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2003-05-27 04:53 PM

There's a whole lot of learning
and I never go a day
without gaining something from
the wise words I see scattered
throughout Passions....

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2003-05-27 06:46 PM

Yes, you say it beautifully, there are true treasures to find here. The only problem is time ... there seems to be never enough to go through all the posts.
It's also beautiful to be aware of the gifts we touch upon here.
Love, Margherita

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2003-05-27 07:16 PM

Enjoyed...James

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

5 posted 2003-05-27 07:23 PM

terrific write!!!

QjQ

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2003-05-28 03:22 AM

a good piece!

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

7 posted 2003-05-28 03:25 AM

But sometimes
The words written by you all
Show me a love and
acceptance
I never expected
But I swim in it
And it is new
for me

So keep showing me truth
in words
keep inflicting pain with truth
Show me beauty, in pain
teach me lessons
of the soul

And I will learn
every day
from your words
Jason, I really love this. It's
so very true of the writings
here at Passions In Poetry.
Hugs

Ethel

Gina Culliney
Member

since 2003-03-08

Posts 170

8 posted 2003-05-29 10:03 PM

Words of inspiration and beauty and raw intense honesty. (Hopefully, paving the way to a good short story from you!)

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

9 posted 2003-05-29 10:28 PM

Very nice indeed Jason. I too am always learning from the magnificent writers here at Passions. hugs, Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....

-Emily Dickinson

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

10 posted 2003-05-30 12:06 PM

Jason:

amazing write and you know?

I have learned so much here and laughed and cried and smiled and . . .

just as I smiled here . . .
xxoo

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