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SgtMac
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since 2003-05-19
Posts 13


0 posted 2003-05-27 10:11 AM


Listen
Hear it?
Gurgle, burble
Let it go
It laughs
If you want
Laughs
All the way down
Restless too
Every inch
Imagine that
Straight to you

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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
1 posted 2003-05-27 10:23 AM


Hello Sarge.  Welcome to Passions!  I note you posted your first poem in Dark...you have a strength in your writing, short, concise, to the point.

I'm going to enjoy reading your work.

Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen?

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
2 posted 2003-05-27 10:30 AM


I'm listening!--and I like what I hear!
My eyes are also open and I like what I see!

Welcome to Passions! Great to have  you aboard!

Warm welcoming hugs,
Earth Angel

Midnitesun
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Gaia
3 posted 2003-05-27 11:53 AM



WELCOME!
I like this little giggling post!
Hope you'll stick around and enjoy the variety here at the Pipsters board.

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