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ethome
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since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

0 posted 2003-05-27 05:36 AM

This is a repost but it kind of hit me again the other day so I thought I'd throw it in here again.

The Shining Feeling

From where I stand I see the thaw
and on the frozen floor
the sun upon the glowing crust
is glistening bright and pure.

Upon the rolling marbled hills
the glossy snowdrifts ride.
There is no place nor earthly thrill
like springtime greenwood life.

A musty scent is on the air,
I lift my head and breathe.
Out of the sky I seem to hear
a calling on the breeze.

The sound of God and life and wild,
the sound of earth that grows,
out of the wind that whispers by
the sound of trees that moan.

I know just why it is I care,
I bend my head and pray.
I cannot lock them in my heart
these tear drops on my face.
© Eric True

The role of poetry is to utter the un-utterable; to open up
spaces of consciousness and resistance; to language oppressions; to
re-language historie

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

1 posted 2003-05-27 05:42 AM

Really nice...James

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

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Gaia

2 posted 2003-05-27 12:08 PM

"The sound of God and life and wild,
the sound of earth that grows,
out of the wind that whispers by
the sound of trees that moan."

you are an attentive listener

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2003-05-27 12:15 PM

ETHome~
You reach out and touch with your thoughts at a time when 'someone' needs to hear~

'I know just why it is I care,
I bend my head and pray.
I cannot lock them in my heart
these tear drops on my face.'

I have a special friend that I'd like to send this one to~
Thank you for sharing~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

4 posted 2003-05-27 12:31 PM

I am a big fan of your writing, so please feel free to repost a poem any time the spirit moves you! This was beautifully written.

Warm hugs,
EA

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

5 posted 2003-05-27 06:58 PM

I am on my way to go hug the trees and to moan with them ....
This is achingly beautiful!
Thank you.
Love, Margherita

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

6 posted 2003-05-27 07:37 PM

Eric, a touching poem which flows with the
awe and wonder of all there is.. Well done.

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

7 posted 2003-05-27 08:23 PM

enjoyed

Nightshade

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since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

8 posted 2003-05-27 08:32 PM

Lovely ethome, I am glad that you decided to repost this. Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....

-Emily Dickinson

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

9 posted 2003-05-28 03:17 AM

very touching

ethome
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since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

10 posted 2003-05-28 04:51 AM

Thanks to all for the very kind words I appreciate the comments and the response.

Eric

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