Open Poetry #26 |
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Lying Neighbor |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA ![]() |
We got a new neighbor Who was always kind Did a lot of work for us Helped us fix up the house He told us he didn't take drugs But one day we found out wrong When he accidently dropped cocaine In my mommas car That night my Dad went over there And told our neighbor A piece of his mind And told him we didn't need His services anymore He lied to us That was his mistake Now he woun't be getting Drug money from us anymore Cold hands means a warm heart |
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ThunderMage Senior Member
since 2002-06-20
Posts 812Canada |
I smoke some grass here and there, but cocaine is just crap. If it's harder than weed, it's no dang good. ![]() What is life without poetry and adventure? |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Julie, you do have such a way of honest sharing. There are times I read your words and I am stunned into silence by the portraiture. You are a written visual of our society and I am very glad you are back. You never fail to ignite my brain into thought, and inspire. Thank you. ![]() |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Thank you for the kind words Serinity Blaze. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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skyshine![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
Wow I'm sorry to hear about the problems with your neighbor. Hopefully he will learn from this. Welcome back to the forums! ![]() ~Elizabeth Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone... |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Your poem packs a punch with a strong message...Very well done... |
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Ratleader![]()
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
There are rats, and then there are rats.... ....this rodent excluded, of course! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
good you found out! |
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