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ecrivan
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0 posted 2003-05-26 08:47 PM



Today's Canadian mind is on the mad cow disease
and how a once innocuous virus can take victims...
if one peruses through the shelves of books for symtoms
today's modern mind pays more to feel ill at ease

if you please...I've heard enough of deadly spores
seen enough discontinued volumes on creaky floors
but my mind has been honed in the mold of consumer
to pull from the shelves...fight the onus of loser

continue to fill pockets of other men...
sounds like civil disobedience towards myself
but I'll go through the pay your debt motions
fix incantations and anti-depressive potions
the one at the very top could not care less
learn to reflect on my volume rich mess
it's time to write independent versions
free of the bacterial spores that hits the news
free of the knobby knees that lined creaky pews

I continue to fill the pockets of other men
sure to reach my goal at the end of the bend
will hear about west nile disease
enough is enough..will you please
free to espouse the benefits of life here
free of spores and mad cow disease fear

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QjQ
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1 posted 2003-05-26 08:50 PM


informative write i enjoyed reading,

QjQ

Aenimal
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2 posted 2003-05-26 08:51 PM


Hey you forgot Sars in TO the Odds of getting it are so slim but it never stops the panic and stupidity and those are the real diseases of the day
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3 posted 2003-05-26 08:54 PM




(big hugggsssssssss) I hate it when that happens too, here I am an American and this is an issue I feel very strongly about! Just a few years ago, we were so very worried about the foot-and-mouth disease destroying livestock, now we push it aside like it's no problem and wait till a mass numer of people suffer elsewhere until we go back to step one! (sad sigh) It is disturbing and I only wish this issue can get just as much focus as AIDS and SARS are getting, as every disease is a concern, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Martin, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

ecrivan
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4 posted 2003-05-26 08:58 PM


No Raph, haven't forgotten that the real disease of the day is our tendency to sensationalize..and that's the undercurrent message here for all of us.Thanks for sharing


ecrivan
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5 posted 2003-05-26 09:04 PM


Hey Noah,

a certain amount of coverage by the media
should be informative but regarding Sars that brought the WHO to popularize a very limited outbreak..and it's limited to some health care centres in Toronto..so I don't think that
coverage is a good example for you..getting the major airports to do checks on people coming from high incidence countries would have been more appropriate.

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6 posted 2003-05-27 03:41 AM


yeah, I get it...good message
ethome
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7 posted 2003-05-27 05:32 AM


Yeah, that's what I like a good positive poem!!
Good work!!

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8 posted 2003-05-27 12:06 PM


LOL, OVERKILL
isn't that the appropriate word?
good write

Aenimal
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9 posted 2003-05-27 12:36 PM


No I know you haven't forgotten about sars but that is my point who would let you forget. I think there's an image of Toronto being a deathtrap where people walk around in gowns and masks..it's so utterly silly and I'm quite tired of it. I'm going to go down to chinatown(asians have been targetted or blamed and business is suffering) and see if I can get some prime beef at the same time.
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10 posted 2003-05-27 12:37 PM


D'accord! You and I of the same mind on this one!

Warm hugs,
EA


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11 posted 2003-05-27 12:40 PM


it's amazing the impact the news can have on our minds.  it can send us into panic, ruin a day, or give us hope.  Good portrayal...

Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS

ecrivan
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12 posted 2003-05-27 08:11 PM


Raph,

I had some noodles and beef at my favorite
oriental food chain too in Montreal on the weekend...look the fact that the culprit cow died in Januar and we here about it in May....that itself is criminal not the meat...

Earth Angel,

if there isn't an issue..won't certain people go to any extent to make one??...how many times will this ring true.



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ecrivan
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13 posted 2003-05-27 08:16 PM


Midnite,

My thoughts are with the poor blokes who had contact with the cow directly or indirectly
in an industry already riddled with setbacks
like lack of grazing land.

Ethome

just being me...thanks for reading

Kristie,

even though I write freelance myself I am so much aware of the impact that undo negativity can do on the public...and the economy suffers in the end as does our morale.



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