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in the darkness of all light
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in the darkness of all light |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA 
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Smiles are on yesterdays menu and I won't back down pretty pictures of how its meant to taste leaving me out in the sun does me more harm than good and it falls to my skin my skin as if by mistake minds eye is untouched I stare over miles of black within it and watch the unknown grow its mass of alien grey deformity looms eyes that pierce further than my weak white shell and they grin, and stamp out my light lighting the smoke with every inch of what I am not wishing i were on todays menu. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
you're an artist nuff said |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
cool write |
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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
I like it! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Gemma, my friend, all I know to say is that I wish I could write like this. You are a very talented writer. I hope that you know that....and I also hope that even when you aren't with us here at Passions In Poetry, that you are still writing your beautiful poetry. I never can quite figure out if some of your poem are written from your own personal experiences, or if they are written from observation. Either way, you are a very talented writer.  You know, I've got a poem posted in the archives where I wrote on the subject of if where poems were written from. I might look for it and repost it. By for now, little friend  Hugs,  Ethel Mae |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
What an interesting write! You definitely have talent! WArm hugs, EA |
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