Open Poetry #26 |
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Ocean of Souls (In Memory Of) |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA ![]() |
You gave with an outpouring of unselfish courage, bravery and even fear. You, the thousands of souls who have trod the killing fields as life sapped unmercifully falls before you, causing a stumble. The screams unheard, the terror blinded to the world, brought slowly into our eyes..as we wept our tears and the waters of our eyes mingled with your own. In memory we honor, as hands touch the walls, rest softly upon each granite stone...of the known and those who rest without. I give... To each, my admiration, praise.. My devotion to the memory which shall not die....for each has died a hero’s death..remembered... And I stand before you....heels together, shoulders straight....saluting proudly....as my tears mingle in the ocean of souls, not forgotten... [This message has been edited by Magnus (05-25-2003 01:35 PM).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
We have so many to be proud of... those living, and those passed... Thank you, Magnus... |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
This peace, and this piece, brought such a reverent thump in my soul. Thank you for the reminder of the meaning of this time, so eloquently stated, by such a talented and loving hand. TD |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Should be read aloud--to a sea of crosses. Touching. Truly one of the best tributes I've read. |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
May they rest in peace, everyone. Thank you for sharing this. |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
What I wrote...flows from a well full of my own tears...For each cross, covered in tears, casts a shadow of remember upon my heart. Thank you each... |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
With such words from the soul how could we ever forget....you bring tears to the hearts and souls of all who read your words...This poem is a timeless masterpiece and I feel it a privilege to have read it. Thank you for remembering. |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
![]() I give... To each, my admiration, praise.. My devotion to the memory which shall not die....for each has died a hero’s death..remembered... And I stand before you....heels together, shoulders straight....saluting proudly....as my tears mingle in the ocean of souls, not forgotten... |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Thanx Karen...bunches... Ethel....I am speechless...touched deeply, thank you... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Barry, dear man...your poem is heart touching..thank you! |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
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