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LastMoments Member
since 2003-03-07
Posts 92 |
You told me to trace you I followed your ways You told me to be you I looked past everything I gave up everything To be your puppet And now I have nothing Nothing to look back on The pool that drowns me Deep inside my heart The pool that takes my feeling And sufficates it away Just how can I retrace The feeble steps I took I can't look at myself the same I'm no longer who I was Your words dig under my skin And spread it all across Your words dig into my hands I can't keep a firm grip anymore I never wanted to let go I never wanted to give in You made me what I was You make me into nothing And nothing I remain |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
damn! I know how you feel, what you write here...I know, too well |
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JilGirl Member
since 2003-05-24
Posts 364Washington |
No way is the character in this write "nothing"! A lesson well learned, the truth expressed, the facts down pat, this sings a song of victory and brings forth the the absolute "SOMETHING" out of a seemingly "nothing"! Blessings! Till oceans cease to flow and deserts lose their sands, may beauty surround you every day and wealth be in your hands. |
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