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A Freshman |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri 
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A Freshman... In awe... I gaze at creamy textures of senior pen strokes, one melting soft into another in uninterrupted flow. I sigh... My naive heart can’t help but long to hear that same satisfied sigh of my interpreters. But alas... I am no more than a novice soloist, an unaccomplished pianist of verse. I am... A Freshman craftsman with impatience culminating jagged at my fingertips. A Poetess, nonetheless... I shall continue steadfast and studious in pursuit of graduation day. [This message has been edited by Patricia (05-24-2003 12:27 PM).] |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
if you're a freshman, I must be in first grade! I like this, don't under estimate yourself!  Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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MikeFessel Member
since 2003-04-19
Posts 321Brooklyn, NYC, USA |
Patricia, Oooh so good! I feel the same fustrations, I hate being new and poor at something at the same time. But count yourself blessed, for while I am both when it comes to writing, you are only the first Mike See ya around! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I agree with GG, first grade is about right. Very nicely done Patricia....don't slight yourself... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
dang! keep the mind, heart, and soul growing and learning every day...awesome writing! |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
GG sorta said it ALL! If you're a freshman, I don't have a chance! Wonderful, wonderful write. jwesley |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Well done. Very well done. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I guess you just proved yourself wrong with this wonderful write!  Warm hugs, Linda |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Everyone is great a poetry in their own different way of writing, You surely arent a freshman at it, your work is very good Julie |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Being a Freshman in Life isn't so bad, Patricia...some of us are life-long scholars...and graduation is far, far off down that dusty road...  Image PiPtalk.com |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Patricia Good write, good thoughts, enjoyed. |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Hey Patricia , I say this was excellently explained and expressed .... I am not always confident with what I write , I am just hopefully growing Hope |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Patricia - graduation day was a while back me thinks... BC |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Thank you for your replies of kind words. Every day I thank goodness for Passions...I learn so much here. I have not even been at this beautiful school two months, and have received such a grand education. I do feel myself growing in my writing...sometimes two steps forward and one back...but I will get there I know. Again thanks. Patricia |
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