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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Amuck Some times my feelings run amuck And my mind and thoughts get stuck A little like a doldrums sea A time when I call out to thee. And though I do not hear thy voice I seem to have no other choice For though I rant and rave and swear Somehow I feel that you are there. I’ve asked forgiveness in my rhymes And cried to thee oh countless times You have the patience of a saint But your voice is still too faint. You let me reign but oh the pain I stand the abyss of insane And black is black and white is white And I can’t stand forever’s night. I’d give you back what you gave me For just a moments light to see |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Morning Seymour! Sometimes my feelings run amuck Just like yours But with some luck They do calm down As you will see After banana muffins With your tea ~ Hugs for another wonderful morning gift. Have a great day. Chris  "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Chris, Your gift to me is your reply,  |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Yes, Seymour. I know this, too. I thank you also for your gift to us every day. Hugs,  Ethel |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ethel, I would I could gift you more, |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Seymour, Things had better not run amuck today! My youngest son is being married and I have over 60 people coming here to our home for the reception. See how much you mean to me with your morning pearls of wisdom? I just can't go one morning without reading my Sy guy! ~Wedding Day Hugs, Smiles, and of course tea Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nancy, And my granddaughter inlaw just graduated a doctor and I am invited to a party of also about 50 people. I wrote her a congratulation poem, I'll put it on the sight tomorrow. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
And though I do not hear thy voice I seem to have no other choice For though I rant and rave and swear Somehow I feel that you are there. I’ve asked forgiveness in my rhymes And cried to thee oh countless times You have the patience of a saint But your voice is still too faint. You let me reign but oh the pain I stand the abyss of insane And black is black and white is white And I can’t stand forever’s night. I’d give you back what you gave me For just a moments light to see ============================ and I the moth would love to run amuck in your poetic mind  this poem is cooler than a mere moth has words for, and so is the poet.   Darkness cannot drive out darkness ... only light can do that. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Really enjoyed reading this Seymour. Say it all me thinks. jwesley |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I think I hold the forum record for running the muck.  grin... but this? "You let me reign but oh the pain I stand the abyss of insane And black is black and white is white And I can’t stand forever’s night." I know you know I know...and I know you understood that too! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yes, me too  |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Sy - You'll never run amuck... nope - nada... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
congratulations to your granddaughter-in- law...and to Nancy's son..wow a busy weekend for you all. Hugs M |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I relate....very well... Thanx for sharing this with us... |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) I do think thoughts are meant to go amuck, maybe the muse even does that because she knows you can do better and it just takes time to imagine just what! (big hugggsssssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
TO ALL THE ABOVE, THANK YOU SO MUCH. I'M BEING KEPT BUSY AND WILL BE FOR THE NEXT DAY OR TWO. THANK YOU ALL AGAIN AND I'LL CATCH UP. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good evening, Mr. T.! "I stand the abyss of insane" --you too?!?  Remember this: "I'm okay, you're okay!" Sending spoonfuls Amuck antidote! EA |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
So THAT's where you've been hiding, in the ah, muck! Hugs, Sy...and thanks for the grins...  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Some times my feelings run amuck And my mind and thoughts get stuck A little like a doldrums sea A time when I call out to thee. I know about those feelings running amuck. You can't even get them to behave long enough to write them. They are all over the place. Then I seem to dive right into your doldrum sea. Great write as always. Your feelings spoke to mine this day. -Patricia |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel, Sending spoonfuls Amuck antidote! You are an Angel. Patricia, Thank you my dear, |
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