Open Poetry #26 |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This is the hallmark that shames me. shoulders sloop and back in bend a question mark within my spine punctuating every line again the query of my life-- and how did I get here? Heavy eyes and forward stop nodding feel the bottom drop exactly what I'd paid them for-- and chalk is gathered in the crease of the lips I lathered in the fat of L'oreal... Glitter lies upon my chest. A universe unto my breasts I snicker thinking "milky way" and grimace then-- there is no joke. It is late and I'm alone, boxing shadow of the Jung drifting drifting channel change without remote control. This is the paradise that tames me. Foggy sweet I taste it, breathe the candy of myself denied the only way I know to sleep my dreams they cannot haunt me there-- and yet the hallmark of my shame-- nodding feel the bottom drop centrifuged against the side peel me from the curvature and shake me-- say the ride is done. Point me to the exit--laugh. I wobble weak-knee'd down the ramp, steady eyeing distant point. [This message has been edited by serenity blaze (05-24-2003 06:09 AM).] |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Okay Karen, quit giving me goosebumps! Shaking my head here and smiling an understanding smile. hugs, Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
serenity Didn't I tell you not to go on those kooky rides. Now look what you did. LOL |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
It is late and I'm alone, boxing shadow of the Jung You KNOW i love this..brilliant lines |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
goosebumps is an understatement! |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
I believe that at s-s-s-some t-t-time or other, we all feel just like that...inside. Tremendous piece. jwesley |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I wanted to say thanks properly for once. Chris. YOU are the sweetest friend, and I thank you so much for being so patient and generous with me. Seymour? And excuse to sneak a kiss, I say! Raph...chuckling at the Jungian here. Even the shadow packs a mean punch. Hugsandwinks... Dixie? goosebumps again? (stop that yer turnin' me on! ) hugsandwinks to you too! jwesley, I've been wondering...I'll bet you have a few fishing stories to tell...sure wish you'd share some tales of the Westbank with us all! Thanks all for reading, and just a little spin on the "dizzies of life"... |
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