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(Sometimes) Waiting and Trying
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(Sometimes) Waiting and Trying |
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jaysh Member
since 2003-04-16
Posts 133IL, USA 
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"Waiting and Trying" By: Janna Shaffer Age: 14 Sometimes I just sit around. I wait for nothing, And while I wait, I think, I think about the time wasted. Why wait? Why waste time? Sometimes it’s best to wait, Good things come to those who wait, Wait and you will get what you deserve. Sometimes I try so hard, And still I can’t succeed, And while I try, I think, I think about me trying to hard, Why try? Why work if you don’t succeed? Sometimes it’s best to work hard, As long as you do you’re best, You WILL succeed. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
jaysh - your poem is very true, and you have a good attitude about trying. Keep it up, and trying will pay off, it did for me... BC |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
know the feeling...this is quite inspiring! |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
I enjoyed reading your write! >>QjQ<< looking forward to reading more! |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Yep....You're right if you do your best and be true to yourself that's what matters!!!! Good poem!!!! Enjoyed!!! Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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