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Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

0 posted 2003-05-23 07:38 PM

Waves of love my thoughts,
born freely within my heart
they are meant to be caught
by you who watch the stars.

Powerful and endless flow
of this flaming river of blood
divinely guided by the Soul,
created by the breeze of Love.

Like a steadily falling water drop
smoothing the rough stones
each single tear carves the rock
equaling the force of diamonds.

My heartbeats compose words
conceived in a state of grace
to form an eternal verse,
a music of peaceful pace.

With each breath of Love
with each tear shed in truth
with the language of the heart
I express my feelings for you.

When you ask "do you love me?"
I'll show you the carved rock
for you my bright Light, to see
our indelible immortal melody.

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

1 posted 2003-05-23 07:40 PM

I tried to pick a favorite verse, but alas, they are all together as should be. Wonderful. TD

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2003-05-23 07:58 PM

(smiles) And may this legacy always be carved in stone like hieroglyphics for the blood of love to always remain! (big hugggsssssss) This is lovely, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Margherita, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

3 posted 2003-05-23 08:11 PM

such a beautiful verse:

My heartbeats compose words
conceived in a state of grace
to form an eternal verse,
a music of peaceful pace.

loved it

~smiles~
M

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2003-05-23 08:27 PM

How welcome this "rock" feels,
to sit upon, and count the stars
amidst the shusshing of waves...

thank you Margherita....

this was, and is, a very calming,
soothing, read....

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

5 posted 2003-05-23 08:45 PM

Margherita, this is so beautiful. I love all
of it...the poem and the picture. But this part is
really special. I  feel  it!!

My heartbeats compose words
conceived in a state of grace
to form an eternal verse,
a music of peaceful pace.

With each breath of Love
with each tear shed in truth
with the language of the heart
I express my feelings for you.

Yes, I know those feelings  very  well!!
Thank you for a beautiful poem.....
Hugs

Ethel

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (05-23-2003 08:46 PM).]

whiskey

Senior Member

since 1999-12-28

Posts 1278
Australia

6 posted 2003-05-23 09:09 PM

What a lovely poem, full of love and emotion, I enjoyed it very much

Julie

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

7 posted 2003-05-23 09:17 PM

Margherita - as romantic as they come. Nice, nicely done...

BC

SimplyGold
Senior Member

since 2002-07-10

Posts 1453

8 posted 2003-05-23 10:57 PM

Margherita,

"My heartbeats compose words
conceived in a state of grace
to form an eternal verse,
a music of peaceful pace.

With each breath of Love
with each tear shed in truth
with the language of the heart
I express my feelings for you."

I love this, it is beautiful.

SG

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

9 posted 2003-05-23 11:21 PM

Margherita you always have such a way of capturing beauty in words

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

10 posted 2003-05-24 03:49 AM

damn beautiful!

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

11 posted 2003-05-24 07:59 PM

Thank you my friends for your kind and generous comments.

Love, Margherita

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

12 posted 2003-05-25 02:03 AM

I want a carved rock...James

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

13 posted 2003-05-25 06:54 PM

Margherita~
This is wonderful~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

14 posted 2003-05-25 07:14 PM

Beautifully written, complemented well by
a mere rock...Mere? No way! Nicely done.

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

15 posted 2003-05-26 09:52 AM

So beautiful Margherita.
Love,
Eric

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