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QjQ
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0 posted 2003-05-23 12:41 PM

A night-in-gales song

A night-in-gale sings to his mate
for her to come to him at night.

As i lay here in rapture of you my
darlin, my lips dry from no kisses.

My arms empty of you, my heart
wounded and in pain.

Only if you if you understood the
song i'm singing to you tonight.

Like the night-in-gale does, then
you would fly to me.

And wet my lips with kisses and
fill my empty arms and patch my
wounded heart of pain.

My song i sing to you is like the
loving song of the night-in-gale
in the night to his mate.

And not to be confused by the nite
whistling of the whip-poor-will.

QjQ

[This message has been edited by QjQ (05-23-2003 04:30 PM).]

Sunshine

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1 posted 2003-05-23 01:50 PM

A beautiful song, Glenn...
one that surely would not be confused
should the whippoorwill sing...

Brad Majors

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2 posted 2003-05-23 02:26 PM

well done

Marge Tindal

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3 posted 2003-05-23 02:28 PM

QjQ~
Very nicely done~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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passing shadows
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4 posted 2003-05-24 04:01 AM

wonderful piece!

Nan

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5 posted 2003-05-24 07:20 AM

How DO those birds know their own? I enjoyed this, Q...

garysgirl

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6 posted 2003-05-24 07:21 AM

QjQ, this is a beautiful love song even
though it is kind of sad.

"To be in love with love is truly to love".....by Paladin
~with heart hugs from Ethel__GG~

JilGirl
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since 2003-05-24

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7 posted 2003-05-24 10:27 AM

Any "she nightingale," with any sense, would surely hearken to your song. If she didn't, she'd deserve to be confused by the whippoorwill's whistle!

A delightful write!

vandana

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8 posted 2003-05-24 12:00 PM

nice

JilGirl
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9 posted 2003-05-24 11:17 PM

I'd like to read more of your work. This one was most enjoyable!

Till oceans cease to flow and deserts lose their sands, may beauty surround you every day and wealth be in your hands.

QjQ
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10 posted 2003-05-24 11:29 PM

well gee thanks jilgirl,, you can see all my work by going to the top where you see the date and time, click on the find poems.
there you can see all my work!!!

QjQ

whiskey

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since 1999-12-28

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11 posted 2003-06-01 10:00 PM

Your right I like this alot, I love everything about that era back then, you expressed it well so romanticly

thankyou

Julie

"Dont cry because its over, smile because it happened. "

ThisDiamond
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12 posted 2003-06-02 01:39 PM

That night-in-gale sings a most wonderful song...
Being a bird enthusiast, I can only say it is a difficult song to miss, and most pleasant in the find.

Nice write. TD

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