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Sunshine
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0 posted 2003-05-23 10:53 AM



Thunder Rumbles

It's too late
for spring rain
the fall has come

it's too late
for growth of grain
the fall has come

it's too late
but skies now fill
and thunder rolls along

white gray blackened
clouds now whirl
and the thunder rolls

but it's

too late for us [boom boom]
too late for us
it's
too late for us [boom boom]

and the thunder rolls [boom boom]

and the rumble rolls [boom boom]

come again you, yesterday
come again you now

come again you yesterday
come and see just how

it's too late for us

too late for us [boom boom]

too late for us [boom boom]

and the rumble rolls

Simon's in my heart
Simon's in my soul

it's too late for us
and the thunder rolls

and the rumble rolls

CD played strong and long
CD played it loud

CD played Simon's song
and I'll bet he's proud

but it's
too late for us [boom boom]

too late for us [boom boom]

the beat goes on
and it's

too late for us [boom boom]

If you could
hear this beat
and hear the
drummin' song

before long you'd
tap your feet

and spread this
song along

but it's
too late for us [boom boom]

too late for us [boom boom]

it's too late for us [boom boom]

and the rumble rolls

and the rumbles rolls
~~~~~~~~~~
and the rumble
~~~~~~~~~~
rolls.

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Earth Angel
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1 posted 2003-05-23 11:11 AM


Thank you, Sweet Rays of Sun! You are such a versatile writer! Thoroughly enjoyed this--altho' the theme be a bit on the sad side.

Let the thunder roll and banish dark clouds away.

Lovin' hugs,
Linda

Jason Lyle
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since 2003-02-07
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2 posted 2003-05-23 11:13 AM


Nice, I felt the thunder.

Jason

garysgirl
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3 posted 2003-05-23 11:59 AM


Sunshine Lady, this is cute. It kind of has a
wild beat to it with all the boom-booms in it...HeeHee!!
It made me think of that poem that somebody wrote
right after I came here where he told the readers
how to keep time with the rhythm by tapping our feet.
I could picture a whole bunch of PIPsters sitting
in front of their computers tapping their feet to
the beat.   LOL   Or the poem where you told us all
about the difference of standing on your head when
you were younger and doing it now. LOL
Hey why don't you repost that one? HaHa!!
Hugs,  
Ethel

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (05-23-2003 12:00 PM).]

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