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eminor_angel
Member

since 2003-05-22

Posts 323
Canada

0 posted 2003-05-22 09:15 PM

Here's my first poem up here, and comments would be greatly appreciated!! thanks.
Liquid Pain

Some day I feel
That my heart will melt
And drip from my soul
Like warm butterscotch sauce
Like blood
Some days I fear

whiskey

Senior Member

since 1999-12-28

Posts 1278
Australia

1 posted 2003-05-22 09:20 PM

I think we all have felt that way at one time or another.
Welcome to passions

Julie

Saunni
Senior Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 1777
West Virginia

2 posted 2003-05-22 09:49 PM

Welcome! Very cool title you have here and a great piece of work. Love this

Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2003-05-22 09:56 PM

(big hugggssssssss) I do believe everyone has these feelings every once in a while, dearest friend, believe me, I have felt this way myself but if you always follow your heart, it will only shine like gold! This is a wonderful debut, sweet friend, God Bless You! Welcome to Passions, sweet friend, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your splendid poetry, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2003-05-23 02:10 PM

Welcome to Passions! Please,
check your E-mail for a Special Greeting.

Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen?

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

5 posted 2003-05-23 02:27 PM

nicely done. welcome!

icebox
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

6 posted 2003-05-23 02:56 PM

A perfectly clear set of dynamically balanced images. Well done.

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

7 posted 2003-05-23 02:59 PM

Yes, I've experienced liquid pain.
Now, I'm only wanting liquid happiness.

WELCOME to PASSIONS!

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