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vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

0 posted 2003-05-22 12:15 PM

Quiet night
Quiet moments
Quiet love
WhIspering words
Forever
This Is love
This Is rIght time
This Is the night
When you gace me love
The love I was longing
Quiet night
Swaying
Away
To the love
Quiet night
Quiet moments
Today was the day
The moment of love
The last petal
of a rose
Fragance rose
Sunshine through my window
Rose petal
Quiet nights
Dark clouds rolling
To the night
Seeing this love
so true
Every night
Is a quiet night
Forever and for always
Quiet night
quiet moment
In my lIfe
No words
Quiet night
Falling and falling.....
To the moment
of this night

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

1 posted 2003-05-22 12:19 PM

can I borrow your words sometime my friend?? you always seem to have wonderful ones. . .

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Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

2 posted 2003-05-22 12:19 PM

I liked the progress of the quiet... nice...

Regards
Sudhir

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2003-05-22 01:00 PM

awesome piece of work! love the ending most

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

4 posted 2003-05-22 01:27 PM

wonderful...especially I like the way the last three lines tie it all together...perfectly.

jwesley

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2003-05-22 03:32 PM

Vandana, my friend...

Sunshine will always come
through your windows...

lovely write, young poetess...

keep it up!

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2003-05-22 04:26 PM

Very very lovely Vandana!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2003-05-22 11:51 PM

(smiles) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is beautiful, you always have such beautiful words to share and you are blossoming as a young poetess with the sunshine always glowing around your loving aura! (kiss on cheek) Yay, I love this, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

icebox
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

8 posted 2003-05-22 11:59 PM

I am not sure how it worked, but this left a nice feeling inside me. Thank you.

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