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Something about Art |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind 
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White fences fireflies striking light: --We lit candles random color liquid gliding just before stars arrived; {in} layer after layer fading daylight Tonight the world will whisper something about art: love songs in many voices, immortal shadows-- I will only vaguely recall the orchid smell of your skin in combinations of night and glow as if on faith sentence by sentence between dark shores &no solid ground bolts of silk lovely and moving because I love a dangerousmemory Tonight there are mirrors on the side walk; petals falling on cathedral steps Still now, I know what you were Thinking: we were cloud and shadow moving over snow you were the last word Through the darkness I can see your light And you will always shine And I can feel your heart in mine I will remember you [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (05-21-2003 11:36 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) I think we all need these dangerous memories, sweet friend, without them what can we create and the art is all bland! (kiss on cheek) Always cherish those lovely memories and breathe those remaining leaves of the orchids and crocus, sweet friend, yay, God Bless You, I'm so happy you're back posting, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lauren, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
--We lit candles random color liquid gliding just before stars arrived; {in} layer after layer fading daylight Tonight the world will whisper something about art: love songs in many voices, immortal shadows-- I will only vaguely recall the orchid smell of your skin in combinations of night and glow as if on faith sentence by sentence between dark shores ========= Tonight there are mirrors on the side walk; petals falling on cathedral steps Still now, I know what you were Thinking: we were cloud and shadow moving over snow you were the last word ================================ god I love your poetry... and needed to read you tonite... more than I even realized till the words fell into me mothy heart. Stunningly lovely write Lauren... Butterfly whispers baby... yeah...you know.   I refuse to accept that mankind is so tragically bound to the starless midnight of racism & war that the daybreak of peace can never be reality. |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
like the picture your words paint, and the little snippits here and there laced together |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Wonderful piece, I enjoyed reading it alot  Julie |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome write! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
bolts of silk lovely and moving because I love a dangerousmemory Tonight there are mirrors on the side walk; petals falling on cathedral steps Still now, I know what you were Thinking: we were cloud and shadow moving over snow you were the last word Goodness Lauren, this is beautiful!! I wish I could write like this... Hugs,  Ethel |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Lady.... you have no idea what your words touch in me... thank you for that... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh my Lauren... You are the last word! This is amazingly beautiful! Love your work...may I ask for more please? ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
we were cloud and shadow moving over snow you were the last word ~*~ Teach me graceful... please? |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Greeneyes - your poetry is indeed art... BC |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
yes, there is something about this. . . being as it is art. . . and, to paraphrase, there's something about you as well. . . wonderful my friend. . . just wonderful. . . ----------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
The last word often leaves a dangerous memory~ and you dear Lauren, inspire the risk, raising the level of excitement. Congratulations, 5000 times over and over~ So pretty is the vision through your eyes~ |
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Opeth Senior Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 1543The Ravines |
First of all ~ it is very good to read you again...you have been gone for quite some time, I do believe. When I read your poetry it reminds me of the lyrics of my favorite modern band...still. Tonight the world will whisper something about art: love songs in many voices, immortal shadows-- I will only vaguely recall the orchid smell of your skin in combinations of night and glow as if on faith ~ That segment above was my favorite. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Missed your words, write more |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
fabulous write!!! QjQ |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
'Tonight there are mirrors on the side walk; petals falling on cathedral steps Still now, I know what you were Thinking: we were cloud and shadow moving over snow you were the last word' Wow. And believe me, I feel like an idiot saying that but that's all I can think to say. LOL This is how I aspire to write... It will be a long, long climb, I'm afraid.  Really enjoyed this! |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Something about YOUR art..... ....makes me read every word you write, and try to understand the power and beauty of it, so I may capture an echo in my own. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
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