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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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Seamless curves of passion sheer, flaunted before the gaze as time stops the Ben. A mere tick before...ho-hum... Till eyes boiled over into the blubber of my throat incapable of speech....... Life changed upon the tick of a pendulous swing as a haze fogs the mind into premature cognitive failure of all senses.... A mere mass of quivering flesh covering the gum stained walk. Until the sweep of refuge, discarded butts and wrong numbers are whisked away beneath amber lights and flashing signs....before the next tick.... |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Indeed - but for the blink of an eye... The course of past/present/future can be altered... This is a wondrous write, Magnus P.I....  |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
nice read and write, when i seen seamless i thought it was a write about stockings,because you don,t see the stockings with seams down the back anymore,gee i wonder if anyone still remmebers them? i bet if they do they wont admit it lol  A thought from a stranger is cherished, |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Thanx Nan...when you write....I listen... glad you enjoyed this little deviation from my norm.. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
QjQ....thanx for the comments...I was referring to the flawless appearance of an awesome feminine form, and NO, I won't comment about the stockings... |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Vivid images of the sidewalk, a seamless voyage into the twists and turns of the imagination. Nicely done. TD |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
"oooooh" you managed to capture goth in short visuals here. I could feel that cool clammy of fog creeping too. (sometimes my mind just adds things) You are one of those "sure-bet" poets that I sadly neglect in reply. I just get "quiet" sometimes, believe it or not. Sheepish grin. Enjoyed. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
The way you put thoughts on these pages of blue amazes me! Enjoyed. Chris  "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Is that what happens?  as for the stockings, Glenn... yes! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very nicely done Barry... I enjoyed this sensual side of you. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very nicely done Barry...whew! Glenn, I got stockings with the seam down the back...but had to get them from a shop I would not normally go into, except on special occasions...*where did I put those things?* |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Very stong images. I can seen the snapshots quick in my mind as you present yet another in your slide show. This is wonderful. This is where I lack in my poetry...the presentation of visuals which clearly speak the meaning. Thanks for sharing and teaching! -Patricia |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice write |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
It's in seeing the beauty of the feminine form that i say yes..there is god |
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