Open Poetry #26 |
Maree |
Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Maree I believe she must Possess legs, But they are delicately Designed of springs, As she bounces when uttering WOW Which she does, Often, when overtaken by a poem… She, who writes of depth, With purpose, Coming in on whisper of wings, A dark angel who only Leads us through the dark, While harboring an inner, Secret, Light. Maree. If you can But imagine A dark flame Of beauty You are seeing, in Your imagination, Dark Angel, A poetess Of de’light. |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
very nice write "K" i enjoyed it very much. ty 4 the web,s A thought from a stranger is cherished, |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
From what I have gathered from her poetry and replies, this captures her essence beautifully... Loves 'n hugs to you both! Linda |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Wonderful tribute to our Maree...I know it will make her shine even more brightly. |
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Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
She is definitely a "Down Under Delight"... Nicely said, Sunshine... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
As she bounces when uttering WOW Which she does, Often, when overtaken by a poem… She, who writes of depth, With purpose, Coming in on whisper of wings, A dark angel who only Leads us through the dark, While harboring an inner, Secret, Light ================== well this is just so cool... and youve captured her spirit well... one of my fave poets who just doesnt post often enough!!! Very poetically gracious of you Kari... we love when ya shine on us. I refuse to accept that mankind is so tragically bound to the starless midnight of racism & war that the daybreak of peace can never be reality. |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
...and an exceptional lady and poetess she is....come out and take a bow, Maree |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
How perfect Karilea.. and Maree does say "WOW" too... She will love this I know... ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Very lovely thoughts of a lovely lady. This was sweet of you. Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Oh My Karilea, you have no idea what you have done to this girl right now. I'm so deeply touched... thank you so much....it's beautiful and so are you my sunshinygirl, you have me in tears with this wide grin across my face. I wish I could hug you right now. I'm speechless. Thank you! You've made my day. Maree |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nice |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
That was so nice Karilea! And it couldn’t have been written about a nicer person! Richy |
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El_Campeador Senior Member
since 2003-01-29
Posts 761Ohio, USA |
This is really special... I love your choice of words! “We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Karilea, you have spoken of our Maree evr so well, dearest friend, she truly can adjust to the dark and lead us all through as her light can see through any ebony where lies so much comfort and hope! (big hugggsssssss) She is an old soul with a lot of grace, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Isn't she though, all that and more! Maree and Karilea. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Karilea~ What a beautiful tribute to Maree. Gotta love her and gotta love this. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Sunshine...A fragile beauty in this delicately penned piece. Such a musical quality to it. A wonderful tribute or a delightful look into the innermost part of yourself. ***Ivy Rose |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Agreed she's a goddess I lay my offerings of prosciutto and vegemite..grin |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Oh wow...this is awesome! Eric |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Dear poet friends, wow hehe thank you so very much for your lovely thoughts and words, you sure know how to make a girl melt and I'm melting. to all Maree p.s Karilea? |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Karilea, this is so sweet. You truly are a very good friend. Hugs to you both Ethel |
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