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Universal glitch or the pebble crumble
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Universal glitch or the pebble crumble |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium 
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Universal glitch this way says the signpost pointing downhill exactly at a time when I want to go up the hill knowing very well going up the hill is like trying to throw a pebble at the rock and hoping it would crumble -- the rock that is! and yet I seem to like the challenge of running up the hill however exhausted I find myself on reaching the top exhilarating it should be I hoped to howl at the clouds from close quarters keep left says the street sign when the heart knows love is always right and even logic knows that I want to follow LOVE for-love, right? wrong! look before you cross said the billboard and I looked around to find a beautiful face in the crowd deep blue eyes, ocean-like -- Maldives or Bahamas -- hair reddish-brown and curly with the tip of hair brushing pouting lips sending me in wild spins of wild-fire flames like flickering fireflies in the middle of a summer night just before breaking my nose on the crowded mass of the cold lamppost the pebble at the rock the pebble crumbled! [This message has been edited by Sudhir Iyer (05-21-2003 09:57 AM).] |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sudhir~ I like, I like, I LIKE !!!!! *Huglets* ~*Marge*` ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Gosh almighty! Can you ever write! You had me coming and going all over the place! A dynamite of a write--a fascinating read! Lovin' hugs, Linda |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Sudhir, what a magnificent poem!! This one has some of all in it...wisdom, romance, and humor. I had my reply gathering in my head until I got tickled when I came to this part. LOL just before breaking my nose on the crowded mass of the cold lamppost I thought it had turned into a poem of romance. This is a delight, Sudhir.  Hugs, Ethel |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
he he... this was fun to write... just came out... did not know what will come out of it... just kept typing furiously and out came an image quickly followed by another ... till it all crumbled... it even seems a wise write.. right?  glad you all liked...  thanks a lot, regards sudhir |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sudhir, Maybe that's the way you should write. LOL enjoyed |
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El_Campeador Senior Member
since 2003-01-29
Posts 761Ohio, USA |
LOL... I guess I'd better watch where I'm going. I don't think I want to break my nose walking into a lampost while looking before crossing! ~El Campeador “We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
And that's the way the Universe glitches... Nice write, Sudhir... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh Sudhir! a wonderful piece! I so enjoyed this! a definite keeper! |
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sea_of_okc Senior Member
since 1999-06-15
Posts 568Oklahoma City, OK, USA |
Well sudhir whereever it came from go back and get more! Wonderful poem, I thoroughly enjoyed. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sudhir The road, your journey...not always easy, but delightful. Enjoyed this so much! |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
nice held my interest till end A thought from a stranger is cherished, |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
Interesting most definately!! enjoyed it If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Hey, Sudhir, this is really excellent writing! I like the way you connected the phrases the way you did...you have grown and keep growing! Reminds me of the line in Don Quixote - "Whether the rock hits the pitcher or the pitcher hits the rock, it's bad news for the pitcher!" |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Thank you all so very much... for your very kind replies... and thanx Michael for the quote too... regards to all, sudhir |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 BRAVO!!! Oh Sudhir, this is wonderful, sweet friend, normally I think we should always break the rules when we can but yes, it helps to look both ways wherever you go so you don't miss that smile that may be right around the corner! (big hugggsssssss) This is very moving, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sudhir, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Thank you very much Noah... regards sudhir |
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