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Ivy Rose
Senior Member

since 2001-12-29

Posts 1300
MA, USA

0 posted 2003-05-21 12:05 PM

My song found
gently awakening you
into Love's fire...
moon of my soul
singing silky dreams.
The resonant notes of fate
resounding again and again.
My delight...the sound
of your laughter, the beat
of your heart in tune
with the beat of my own.
At night, thoughts
of your naked desire
clothe me in the rich
raiment of our high destiny.
The delicious bell-tones
ringing out the completeness,
the wholeness of the Moon
rising in our souls. Love's
fire consuming our bodies
with the full hour
of sensation's wandering.

Kahlil
Senior Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 1881

1 posted 2003-05-21 12:08 PM

...lovely...exciting...

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

2 posted 2003-05-21 12:19 PM

I especially liked the high density and silky dreams.

This is wonderfully warm to the touch,
somewhere between a sizzle and slow burn.
(or both)

Beautiful writing Ivy Rose~

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

3 posted 2003-05-21 01:03 AM

Ivy Rose - oh yes, sensual it is...

BC

Ceinwyn
Member Elite

since 2000-07-09

Posts 2175
VA

4 posted 2003-05-21 01:11 AM

your words...delicious..

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

whiskey

Senior Member

since 1999-12-28

Posts 1278
Australia

5 posted 2003-05-21 01:19 AM

Lovely piece, so romantic and loving

Julie

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

6 posted 2003-05-21 07:22 PM

IvyRose~
Just WONDERFUL is this penning~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

7 posted 2003-05-21 07:25 PM

loving thoughts well written!!

A thought from a stranger is cherished,
A thought from a friend is treasured

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

8 posted 2003-05-22 12:07 PM

enjoyed

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

9 posted 2003-05-22 01:04 PM

wonderful!

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

10 posted 2003-05-22 01:09 PM

Wonderful my friend...agree with all the above.

jimmy

Saunni
Senior Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 1777
West Virginia

11 posted 2003-05-22 10:27 PM

Extremely romantic! But, you always have been able to write such splendid pieces.

Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

12 posted 2003-05-22 11:16 PM

(smiles) Oh Ivy, this is beautiful, sweet friend, I long so much to see my dream girl standing there in the moonlight with the beautiful light shading her face like porcelain! (kiss on cheek) May your love always let the moon and sun rise in your heart in genuine rotation, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ivy, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

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