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Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

0 posted 2003-05-19 12:53 PM

the other side of the mirror
                                          doesn't reflect
and sometimes, it shows
                                          nothing at all

makes me wonder
how you can see                                 me
when you're looking
at it from
this side

                                          because, I can't
                                          see you either

unless the mirror

br                  ea                   ks
        i                        n
                   two

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

[This message has been edited by Sven (05-19-2003 12:53 PM).]

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2003-05-19 01:34 PM

I don't know how to respond to this, Sven, but I have been on both sides of that mirror.
Just ask Alicethruglass.

M

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

2 posted 2003-05-19 02:24 PM

I like the visual look of this as well as its content

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

3 posted 2003-05-19 02:32 PM

enjoyed it

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

4 posted 2003-05-19 09:25 PM

Sven,
you have to look at the other, OTHER side.
I like what you do with words.
Keth

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

brian sites
Senior Member

since 2002-06-25

Posts 1475
usa

5 posted 2003-05-19 11:38 PM

yes..liking what you say
and how you say it

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2003-05-19 11:42 PM

(sigh) But here comes a far more difficult part, trying to distinguish the pieces from the fallibles! (big hugggsssssss) There certainly is more than one otherside, not everything is lateral, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sven, thank you for sharing!

May love and light awlays shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

JingleBear
Member

since 2003-05-08

Posts 76
Pennsylvania, USA

7 posted 2003-05-19 11:47 PM

I love the way you wrote this! Nice work!

Saunni
Senior Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 1777
West Virginia

8 posted 2003-05-19 11:49 PM

Sven, as always, you can write out of this world. I truly love this.

Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S

Janette

Member Elite

since 2001-07-20

Posts 2843
Chicagoland for now

9 posted 2003-05-20 09:34 AM

I like to think that all sides are good, just some are more clear than others.

An excellent thought provoking write here dear friend and it looks cool, too.

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

10 posted 2003-05-20 09:52 AM

very nice write

Poetry gives us relief, We give poetry reason.

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

11 posted 2003-05-20 12:11 PM

thanks to everyone for replying. . . you're all wonderful. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

12 posted 2003-05-20 12:24 PM

a wonderful lesson. we always think we see but we don't, in actual fact

love the content as well as the layout

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