Open Poetry #26 |
Angry Sad Poem |
j0n4th4n Member
since 2003-03-11
Posts 94 |
I don't know why she won't tell anyone he keeps trying it on if they knew he'd be in deep shtick so now I think she enjoys it moustachioed creep keep your hands off ...but only if she doesn't want you if she does, I don't care. I don't care what anyone does. |
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teenpoet Member
since 2001-10-17
Posts 280Michigan |
So I take it either they're doing it or he's molesting her. And did you like her or are friends with her or something. It's a bit confusing but I think I get it. I don't know if today is a good day, or if yesterday was, or if tomorrow will be, but I'd like to think so. |
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j-oh-E Member
since 2003-05-01
Posts 59Texas, USA |
I start thinking about the way the media blows an event out of proportion and then forgets about it when something "juicier" comes about. In your poem, I am reminded of the indifference people feel when the media-hype is over with. In your poem, you pointed out the fact that it's easy to ignore the horrible things happening around you because these things aren't actually happening to you. That's why you dismiss your anger at the end. I like this. You deserve a good critique. Thanks for writing. -Joey |
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