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Jason Lyle
Senior Member

since 2003-02-07

Posts 1438
With my darkling

0 posted 2003-05-18 06:56 PM

Art but thee, a simple thing
Occams razor, answers bring
But think of thee, and pity sings
Of tainted vows, and wedding rings

Gina Culliney
Member

since 2003-03-08

Posts 170

1 posted 2003-05-18 07:15 PM

Jason, this is really great! what happened to the rest of it????

Jason Lyle
Senior Member

since 2003-02-07

Posts 1438
With my darkling

2 posted 2003-05-18 07:16 PM

lol, knew you would say that...work in progress?

Jason

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

3 posted 2003-05-18 07:33 PM

Jason:

simple in its perfection . . .
it flows nicely
gave me a sense of loss
as in you want an end
but your heart prevails . . .
great write, my friend
xxoo

Jason Lyle
Senior Member

since 2003-02-07

Posts 1438
With my darkling

4 posted 2003-05-18 09:52 PM

Thanks Sue, actually not about my troubles, but a friends.

Jason

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

5 posted 2003-05-18 11:09 PM

I also wish this didn't end so suddenly,
but sometimes it's better that way.

Although it rips right through the heart of me~

Nice Jason~

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

6 posted 2003-05-19 01:59 AM

work in progress? if this is only a tease then an incredible piece awaits us still

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

7 posted 2003-05-19 02:00 AM

hmm, if this is just a taste...
can I have a full cup of this?

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

8 posted 2003-05-19 04:47 AM

sigh

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

9 posted 2003-05-19 04:52 AM

Jason, I agree that this is a good
write. You said a whole lot in a few words.
I'd also like to read more of this.
Hugs
Ethel

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

10 posted 2003-05-19 11:39 AM

yw Jason - either way . . . it breathes

Jason Lyle
Senior Member

since 2003-02-07

Posts 1438
With my darkling

11 posted 2003-05-19 04:08 PM

Thank you all for reading, keeping a promise to a friend, I will try and finish this and repost.

Jason

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