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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space 
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It's better in sleep even nightmares are better than the lies we live |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Wow, you are developing beautifully your favorite theme ..... it's better yes because at least during sleep we are passive observers, during wake we are called to action ... nightly dreams reflect what we endure during the days ... they are better, I think, because if we behold the message we can learn something. Now I go for a walk, here it's Sunday morning. Happy dreams for you. Love, Margherita  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yeah, I do agree with you 100% |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Ok this one I must agree with you on (hey I am agreeing with you someone shake me . . . quick!) seriously . . . yes I know sweet release . . . as always . . . amazing me still xxoo |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Damn yet again...this is good writing! Sadly, I agree. This is another keeper~ Melissa Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world! |
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Gina Culliney Member
since 2003-03-08
Posts 170 |
as an aspiring writer, you amaze me. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Grazie Margherita Knew yu would Dixie..not that we ever sleep Sue thanks ..coma=sleep..1 year thaz'all Thanks M, you're checks in the mail 80% i'm skimming off the top Gina very kind words but i too am aspiring and new to this..means alot to me that you say that ty |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Raph: no no and no - we have already discussed this and you would miss out on wayy too much music - by far . . . [This message has been edited by littlewing (05-19-2003 10:13 AM).] |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Bold... Thinking the nightmares are the lies we live... Excellent write. A ponderance that will last me long... A few words that echo, how cool is that? TD |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Aenimal.... Wish I could write with so few words and say something equally profound. I must try sometime to still my mind into one voice, one song. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
1 year i could catch up Thank you kindly TD Martie thanks for the great compliment |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Maybe that is why I spend so much time in sleeping... M |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
M i used to but lost the skill to fall asleep |
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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
Very true. Well done! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
yes but who would keep tabs on all your music . . . (hmmm . . . ) |
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dani Junior Member
since 2003-05-10
Posts 46 |
in sleep your true thoughts and feelings are shown dreams can't lie |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
yes...i could rant on about the lies, and all that goes unsaid, but i wont. because u make me feel better, cos what you wrote makes perfect sense. sad but true. Have u heard the beatles song, I'm only sleeping. ? always makes me smile. I'd rather sleep too. Then again, i'd rather sleep than do a lot of things. as usual, i've missed you. thanks for reading me mind friend, once again. love gemma xxx |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Thanks Brad Sue you dani if that's true I really am Hugh Hefner??! Missed you too gem, hope your stays permanent? And yes Only Sleeping, Revolver isn't it? One of my favourites..beatles fanatic that I am |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
. . . gee . . . that is tempting now Raph . . ( I am kidding *laughing to slef*) Wow - you would give me that honor thank you . . . oh - I meant YOUR music hehehehe but still . . . no no and no xxoo God - I needed to read this again right now . . . [This message has been edited by littlewing (05-20-2003 06:09 AM).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Holding figurines Last night’s tempestuous dreams Broken one by one ~*~ Thanks for the Inspire, Raph... |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Thanks Sue but I still want a year Karilea honoured that i could |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
I wish I were sleeping beauty..or a bear..I would love to hibernate..sometimes it's always better when I'm sleeping until the nightmares plague me...*sigh* ohh did I say that outloud!? *goes to her corner* If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
I'm about ready to hibernate i sure has hell have stored some fat |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
OMG no you did not!!! urgh..*sigh* sorry to do this to you Raph I'm kind of *cough* under the influence..I hrm...having a huge moment..all alone nobody there to listen..but you shouldn't be so hard on yourself..only I can beat myself up..you're a sweetheart..get over it  If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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lost_star Member
since 2003-03-15
Posts 114NY, U.S.A |
Who knew such few words could mean so much. Great work! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
. . . its summer . . . where will you hibernate? and no . . . |
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