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SparkleeLipGloss
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0 posted 2003-05-18 01:14 AM



As I sit in my dreams
I stare my fear in the eye
I know what will happen
The Enevitable is coming
The end of my world
the end of my life

Forever is never
Even if its too long
My life is seemingly unbareable
not to me
not to you
but to those who don't care anymore
What if i don't care anymore?
Does that mean my life in unbareable?

Never will com
Even if you think it won't
or you don't want it to
Never is what is coming
Never is the enevitable.....

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Brad Majors
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1 posted 2003-05-18 02:45 AM


when you say never you doom it happen by the very thought
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2 posted 2003-05-18 04:37 AM


neat write
SparkleeLipGloss
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3 posted 2003-05-18 01:43 PM


thank you guys for your replies
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