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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-05-17 06:20 PM


With No Time

do not say
you know
how I feel
each silent
moment
races into
agelessness
to cloaking
that will
not warm me
salt now burns
my wounds
meant to
flavor where
the clock
has stopped
with no time



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QjQ
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1 posted 2003-05-17 06:22 PM


another great write,  enjoyied!!

It matters not how you answer, It matters only that i hear you.

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Gaia
2 posted 2003-05-17 07:40 PM


oh, this one did not leave me with a smile
but it did stir an emotion
and that's what it's all about
I think....

That Voice
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since 2003-02-15
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3 posted 2003-05-17 09:20 PM


Ya know
it ain’t ever the same
each heart breaks with a slightly different pain
but I catch your drift

Nightshade
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just out of reach
4 posted 2003-05-17 09:48 PM


Excellent Helen! hugs, Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

SimplyGold
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5 posted 2003-05-17 11:10 PM


I am amazed at how pain can be expressed so differently and in so many ways. I too, catch the drift. Been there like so many before.  Touched me.

SG

passing shadows
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6 posted 2003-05-18 01:00 AM


been there, done it
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