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Open Poetry #26

Where is my mind?

Zeon
New Member

since 2003-05-17

Posts 4

0 posted 2003-05-17 03:25 PM

Where is my mind?

Isnt our mind wonderful
it does our thinking
and it does out sorting
a bit like a scitzo with
one head for two minds
have you ever wished you were someone else?
if your mind is thinking that
do you want to become another person?
but were to clever you see
we have a conscience
it helps us sort from right and wrong
or in another way, good and evil
so do we have too minds in us...?
our bad and good sides
waging war against eachother,
our primal instinct vs our modern morals,
are we all scitzo's? or is this normal
so what would you say if i asked you again
where is my mind?

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2003-05-17 09:20 PM

Well, Zeon,
where is it?
LOL, it's not always easy to reply to something like this since I don't know you.
But?
My mind wanders all over the place, and I find it a really SERIOUS chase some days to catch it!

[This message has been edited by Midnitesun (05-17-2003 09:21 PM).]

That Voice
Junior Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 34

2 posted 2003-05-17 09:22 PM

well,
I keep mine in a jar next to Eleanor’s smile

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

3 posted 2003-05-17 09:23 PM

ROTFL at that reply from
THAT VOICE!

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2003-05-18 05:35 AM

cool! enjoyed this!

Zeon
New Member

since 2003-05-17

Posts 4

5 posted 2003-05-18 07:16 AM

Thankyou for your comments, this was actually the first poem i ever written, slightly strange but i hope you all enjoyed it,

Zeon

Patricia
Member Elite

since 2003-04-06

Posts 2160
Missouri

6 posted 2003-05-18 07:34 AM

Well, now you got me thinking. So, I know my mind is working...isn't it? LOL

-Patricia

Nan

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since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

7 posted 2003-05-18 12:41 PM

I see - the inner dichotomy... Being a Gemini helps, of course... What was I thinking... I must be schizo too... Cute verse, Zeon...

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