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Garden - Duet by Wranx & Littlewing
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Garden - Duet by Wranx & Littlewing |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York 
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I step inside this house of glass Soft sweet rush rainfall drowns me Your soul melding permeating my being Alluring me with words . . . wisdom spoken yet hushed silence you . . . Surrounding me with mixed mingled essence perfumed presence blended into . . . two Intoxicated with hope infused with warmth I look then for the flower Seperating this from that the reds and yellows Peering praying blindly searching I lose myself within this garden magical paradise the spectrum of you Trying to determine if one of these is actually the one that pulled me here To the glass In the first place [This message has been edited by littlewing (04-13-2003 04:46 PM).] |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
littlewing - my goodness this is stunning, I have said that you are one talented poet, and this duet proves it. Now one can't do a duet alone, and wranx, I applaude you... BC |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Enjoyed this very much.. you make a great team. Well Done! Maree  |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
littlewing - my vote, didn't see it before... BC |
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Dreamer@ Junior Member
since 2003-04-13
Posts 38Denmark |
Hey Litle ! Some make poetry with their head some with their fantasy. But when you can feel the heart that feels the word which is written i think you are a poet. And i feel the feelings in your words thats written. Dreamer [This message has been edited by Dreamer@ (04-13-2003 05:08 PM).] |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
BRAVO! BRAVA! APPLAUSE! guess you figured out I love this one |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Absolutely beautiful...you sure have my vote...I love it |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
The transparency of this house of glass shows a delightful atmosphere and feelings that touch the heart of the reader. Mine for sure. Love and my compliments to both of you. Margherita |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
As clear and as smooth as glass... A wonderful blending and flow of two fine inks... Warm hugs, Linda [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (04-13-2003 07:53 PM).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
smiling... it must be spring... lovely you two. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Yay! Oh Sue, you and Wranx make such a wonderful poetic team, dearest friends, this is gorgeous and is the perfect love song for the spring, God Bless You Both, we all love you both so much! You have such beautiful hearts, sweet Sue and Wranx, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice read |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful!! Gets my vote! ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Well, of course this gets my vote!! Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
beyond the glass there is the colored fields of the sirensong singing Spring this glows you two and I am happy to see this |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
oh yummy...2 of my fav poets together...helen |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Sue and Ed, this is beautiful poetry by two beautiful people. Thanks for sharing it with us. Hugs to both of you, Ethel |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Bill - you are much too sweet and talented yourself - thank you so much, my friend xxoo Maree- what a sweet thing to say - thank you Dreamer - thank you for your kind words Kacy - hehehehe I can hear you clapping missy . . . thank you Star - thank you so much! Too sweet. Margherita - of all people I am glad it touched you so - as I admire your writing and you immensely - thank you EA - nice compliment - flow of two inks - thank you - I like that! K - . . . must be spring . . I'll get you later . . . thank you Noah - you always speak from your heart - thank you so much! Nancy and vandana & Chris - thank you so much! bri - coming from you that means a lot - hey could have used those lines . . . thank you Helen - from you this means a lot - thank you Ethel - and a response froma beautiful heart - thank you so very much Thanks guys xxoo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
well, I'm speechless... what a duet! |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Hey Sue, remember we talked about our an all star band that would include Jim Morrison and Hendrix...this is sort of like that. Awesome write SuEd |
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Black Swan Member
since 2003-02-05
Posts 165on the moon |
yes! i love to vizualize ! you certainly make it a wonderful experience too, the phrases are so vivid and alive..and I think its officially unanomous, I love this! ~Talia |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
nicely done, you two *s M |
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dreambuilder Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 319caddyshack |
I loved these lines: Your soul melding permeating my being Intoxicated with hope infused with warmth excellent write you two... got my vote |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Its a marvel isn't it? How she took a few off-hand lines and turned them into this bit of beauty? Thanks folks, for the reading, and the very kind responses. I do love to write, when I don't have to write. This was like that. Ed... |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Dixie - thank you - always here for us Raph - of course I do - cept for we need a drummer . . . lol SuEd - that name will not go over big in the music industry (sued) I need sleep . . . Talia - how very sweet! Thank you - glad you saw into it Dream - you took two seperate lines that were from each of us - very cool - thank you Ed - you know I disagree with you up there -but TY all I did was sprinkle some pixie dust on your forever evolving magic . . . Thanks guys xxoo |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Sorry Sue, I er...uh....forgot to vote. Gads! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I lose myself within this garden magical paradise the spectrum of you Trying to determine if one of these is actually the one that pulled me here To the glass In the first place I like this so very much. *S* Excellent collaboration! *S* |
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dreambuilder Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 319caddyshack |
bump |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
suthern: thank you so much! dream - thanks a million *wink* xxoo |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
I enjoyed reading your write! >>QjQ<< forward to reading more! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely writing...james |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Q - thank you so much James - always nice to see you reading Thanks guys xxoo |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Seamless, graceful and romantic without gush.... excellent work, you two... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
just a terrifect write thats all i can say!!!!!!! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Thanks Ed - very sweet Q - thank you! xxoo [This message has been edited by littlewing (04-21-2003 07:04 PM).] |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Guess that now is a good time to thank everyone for taking the time to read us, and for the warm comments. wow! Ed |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this hasn't made it yet? |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
delete i all ready answered [This message has been edited by QjQ (04-26-2003 01:05 AM).] |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
Delete i all ready answered [This message has been edited by QjQ (04-26-2003 01:07 AM).] |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Now how did I ever not see this, two of my favorites in one poem! Into the library this goes, and what a fabulous collaboration you two. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Dixie - *wink* thank you Thanks Q! Mysteria - thank you so much! xxoo |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Talk about a natural combination -- you guys blend like two strings on the same instrument. This the third time I've visited this poem, and I just realized I never dropped a comment....fixing that right now! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Thank you Ed - so very sweet of you xxoo |
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dreambuilder Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 319caddyshack |
just wanted to say I really loved this - I keep rereading & have printed it out - great write you two [This message has been edited by dreambuilder (04-28-2003 10:59 PM).] |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
What a most precious idea to have a Duet represented in the Anthology. Your poem shows wonderful unity and presence of mind to write as if you were both writing as one. Very well done. Your poem definitely reads and gives a mental appearance as perhaps a most wonderful butterfly and/or bumblebee heaven to me. Intoxicating images here. (Huuuuuh Chooo!!!) Thumbs up to you both. -Bob |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Love how this one keeps resurfacing, two of my favourites |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
dream: thanks again, my friend Bob: you always have such beautiful inspiring words to say - thank you so much -coming from you - this means a lot to me Your writing always brings me smiles Raph: hmmm . . . yes it is funny *wink* thank you Add tourself to that favorite list but I dont have to tell you that now do I? Thanks guys xxoo [This message has been edited by littlewing (05-10-2003 02:42 PM).] |
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