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Cannibal Beware
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Cannibal Beware |
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Joe Houck Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 324california 
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CANNIBAL BEWARE There you see me On the ground Lifeless, freshly dead But making sure Before you feast You bash me on the head Hovering over me Sizing me up Planning where to start You say to yourself I’ll eat your fingers one by one And finish with your heart But before you dine There are things you should know Before you dig right in There are parts of me You should not eat Parts marinated in sin To be continued.... |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
A brilliant beginning... An interesting marinade, sin... One part ignorance, one part bliss, one part remorse. Will stop back for the conclusion. TD |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Suddenly, I'm not the least bit hungry. A good write, Joe! You've found out how to put the world on a diet!  |
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ffpercent243 Junior Member
since 2003-05-04
Posts 37United Kingdom |
The last line made this poem laugh, is there a place on "Passions Poetry" for comic verse? Can't wait to read more, will have to look out for your name. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
well...interesting...strange subject for sure...definitely something we don't think about much |
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