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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass 
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Eclipse it’s only an eclipse a quirk of timing nothing to disturb or give significance these two the sun and moon would shine together blending perfectly their light one light purpose one purpose as it was intended but this random flaw this singlarity of circumstance keeps them apart separates for just a moment all their timing perfect till the world got in the way |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
nice ed...funny how we all stand under the same sky...h |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Till the world got in the way! A good one...  If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ed...As with most of your poetry, this can be read from a deeper level, past just the moon, into the human. Goodnight.  |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
outstanding keeping this one, it has many thoughts blended into one(ness) |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Yes, til the world got in the way... Love that thought... Enjoyed, Hugs Pat |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
nice write It matters not how you answer, It matters only that i hear you. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
it seems to be all a question of timing and where you are at a given (or an ungiven) point in time... enjoyed your words... regards sudhir |
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dreambuilder Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 319caddyshack |
Rat I like the aspect of the combination of the two seems as though the world gets in the way of everything [This message has been edited by dreambuilder (05-16-2003 04:59 AM).] |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Ed: you have no idea how much this means to me truly I am sending this in a card to someone . . . truly bittersweet xxoo [This message has been edited by littlewing (05-16-2003 05:02 AM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
damn! this is awesome! |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Very nice, Ed - I enjoyed this metaphor muchly...  |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Exactly! So much to fill these lines...excellent write. TD |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
*smiles* ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
very nice, Ed. I wonder if anyone got to see it. We had rain all night. M |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Great ending. It infuses the poem with extra meanings, and depth. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
but this random flaw this singlarity of circumstance keeps them apart separates for just a moment all their timing perfect till the world got in the way My thoughts wandered onto many paths as I sat outside last night and watched... wondering who else might be watching. *S* But my primary thought as I read this is that your words are as beautiful as the event. *S* |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Exactly!!! Love this and I'm keeping it!!  ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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