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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Eclipse tonight the night plays in darkness isolated moon invisible veiling song unsung and even obscured you pull at me in your quilted black strung to your tide my soul in dance drawn to your tune each note difficult yet expression so clear you move me you still move me |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
And on an eclipse of the moon too! You know...you move me with your writing. Well done as usual.  If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
as always another nice write It matters not how you answer, It matters only that i hear you. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Ooh, an opposite tack from mine, and done so well! Maybe I should go re-write.... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
beautiful as always bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. Bernie Slicker [This message has been edited by bslicker (05-16-2003 01:49 AM).] |
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