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Open Poetry #26

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Yogi
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since 2001-11-05

Posts 68

0 posted 2003-06-02 02:06 PM

She Stands Tall
Silent, Daunting, Awe Inspiring
Just Looking Sends Fear Into Your Soul
Gray, Razor Sharp Edges With Defense In Mind
She Lures Climbers, Experienced And Not
Thinking She Will Show Them The Way
Letting Go Of Her Secrets, She Will Not
She Plays With There Minds
Convincing Them They Can Conquer Her
Pressing Them To Go On Further, To Reach The Skies
Giving Some A False Dream, False Thoughts
They Reach The Death Zone, Her Soul
Many Have Died, Many Have Survived
But She Always Keeps Enough Room For Just One More
Even If She Lets You Into Her Heart
Letting You Stand On Top Of The World
She Always Has A Surprise In Stall For Your Return
She Will Always Bit Back

Brad Majors

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since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

1 posted 2003-06-02 02:08 PM

well done!

kaile

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since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

2 posted 2003-06-03 11:39 AM

interesting write on an unique topic...you really showed that poetry can be about anything

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