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Open Poetry #26

need help on title

noah j
Member

since 2003-03-05

Posts 82
on the open road with the wind blowing in my hair

0 posted 2003-05-15 12:34 PM

the sun sets
once
when i am no longer yours
and i know it will do the same
again
23 hours and 57 minutes later
for we are in the spring
and i am being reborn
this is the mother in me speaking
“shouldn’t hurt, you’ll live”
she states
in a cold raw mentality
yeah i know—
i think
living is not the hard part
i have much that i want
but nothing i need
i see the people walking down the street
driving their cars
outside my house
and i cry
for i am scared
changes always leave me so sad
even when i am the one who wanted a change

the only people for me are the mad ones-mad to live, mad to be saved, desirous of everything at once--jack kerouac

one_thought
Junior Member

since 2003-04-03

Posts 23
just a state of mind

1 posted 2003-05-15 02:29 PM

"Changing Sun"

nice write

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